Recent Comments

fry
2/11/22, 8:42 PM
Well...there's always next months rent/mortgage payment to make isn't there? More cam shows, special events to take part in?
fry
2/11/22, 8:30 PM
You have a definite story telling gift and a very good writing style! It's rare to read a story about this kind of subject matter that isn't overdone with repetitive profanity and unnecessary violence. I look forward to reading more of your stories!
2/11/22, 7:23 PM
Fascinating. Can't wait for the next part.
Feb 11, 2022
2/11/22, 6:54 PM
Woof! Love this!
2/11/22, 6:47 PM
Great setup! Interested to see where this goes
2/11/22, 6:11 PM
Times are busy, but I love sharing stories. Its tough to find a proper session to just sit down and write a story, so I just take and an idea and sprint out paragraphs as I get small openings to do so. The love is appreciated!
2/11/22, 3:31 PM
Welcome back! You're one of my favorite authors as well. For a quick draft this is pretty perfect.
2/11/22, 3:16 PM
can't wait for more.
Feb 11, 2022
2/11/22, 2:50 PM
Excellent!
2/11/22, 9:26 AM
Wonderfully written, a hidden gem indeed! "Sad" is a tag I tend to avoid, personally, but the ending leaves some room for hope. Vivid in its imagery and powerful with emotion.

2/11/22, 1:19 PM
Thanks for the thoughtful feedback @Norismo! I was on the fence about using the 'sad' tag, and just added a 'hopeful' tag to try and better convey what's going on here.