Recent Comments

2/11/22, 7:23 PM
Fascinating. Can't wait for the next part.
Feb 11, 2022
2/11/22, 6:54 PM
Woof! Love this!
2/11/22, 6:47 PM
Great setup! Interested to see where this goes
2/11/22, 6:11 PM
Times are busy, but I love sharing stories. Its tough to find a proper session to just sit down and write a story, so I just take and an idea and sprint out paragraphs as I get small openings to do so. The love is appreciated!
2/11/22, 3:31 PM
Welcome back! You're one of my favorite authors as well. For a quick draft this is pretty perfect.
2/11/22, 3:16 PM
can't wait for more.
Feb 11, 2022
2/11/22, 2:50 PM
Excellent!
2/11/22, 9:26 AM
Wonderfully written, a hidden gem indeed! "Sad" is a tag I tend to avoid, personally, but the ending leaves some room for hope. Vivid in its imagery and powerful with emotion.

2/11/22, 1:19 PM
Thanks for the thoughtful feedback @Norismo! I was on the fence about using the 'sad' tag, and just added a 'hopeful' tag to try and better convey what's going on here.
MuscleCub
7/14/21, 6:02 PM
First, I want to thank each and every one of you for taking time to read my first attempt at a story. If you enjoyed it, great! I'm glad I could give you a glimpse into a world that is really taking shape. I've been talking with PapaWerebear about this world and these characters and I have two additional story ideas in the works. The first is a prequel to this story set right around the time of the great expulsion involving some of the characters we've already seen, the other is the sequel where our heroes attempt to resolve the tension left thanks to The Exiled. I'm still fleshing out details of both so its going to be a LONG delay before those stories come out (I want to write the complete story THEN publish), but if you enjoyed this first attempt I'm sure you'll enjoy what may come down the pike. Thank you again everyone for taking the time to read this series. Even if it didn't meet your expectations I hope you got some pleasure out of it. -MC

1/8/22, 2:37 PM
This story is absolutely amazing. I am hoping you will continue with it. I am a big World of D&D fan and this fit in perfectly to me. and your descriptive abilities are par only to PapaWerebear and UrsusMajor. I loved the story arc you took. You masterfully created a New World that I truly want to live in. Thank you again and I am looking forward to so much more. Big Bear Hugs @MuscleCub

MuscleCub
2/11/22, 12:46 PM
@Massagecub My apologies for replying so late. Thank you so much. I have had a lot of personal strife in life lately that has kept me from being able to focus on writing, and seeing comments like this one and others give me motivation to get back to the keyboard. Thanks again!
Kyle Cicero
2/11/22, 12:12 PM
I agree with controlme. Every story on this website, and many others, have the basics same theme. Yet, a talented writer, can make it enjoyable and erotic. Jack is such a writer. I would also agree with Jack that, if you don't like his stories, the solution is obvious. Simply go to somebody else. I look forward to the final chapter of the story and hopefully they'll be a continuation of the prior story involving the born again jock. look, from personal experience, I can tell you that it isn't easy to write highly erotic stories. You have to go over them again and again to get it right. Trust me, it takes time and effort. So I appreciate Jack and his writing. I am dazzled by his ability to pound them out, no pun intended, so we readers can do the same. Please don't take this as a slap anybody else but just something I felt had to be said.