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2/10/22, 10:26 PM
You know, Nash still has an unfucked ass...
2/7/22, 3:47 AM
My friend, I am a three time Cancer patient. I'm not well now and I reflect on my past loves; my past aspirations and my unspoken desires and this echoes them all. I want a clear cut finish. I want completion and the end of the speculation. I am Yarifandeddy (an e.e. cummings reference), in my mind. Your story spoke to me so specifically that I'm moved emotionally. I wish, for your characters the closure I cant or wont have. In my mind, that makes you a very powerful writer.

2/7/22, 7:53 AM
@Stroppy Author First off, mate. Thank you for sharing. I'm quite a bit floored by your post and your situation kinda puts my own angst writing this, to task (there's been tossing, turning, self reflection, appeals for input, uncertainty, insomnia, stuck in the character's heads) but that all seems petty and insignificant compared to cancer survival and life reflection; **Thank you** for being on the journey with me. I promise neither of them are 'shallow inserts' but, I've been both—and have fallen for— 'the Yarif' and 'the Eddy' in my day, and neither position is more enviable or pleasant. In the end, I let their final conversation just be 'them'. I gave them the situation, begun with "hello asshole" and then let them go at it unencumbered by 'a story' or 'an author' any further. My thoughts on the ending and clarity; Yarif declares his love for Eddy goes beyond his stemmed-from-trauma people-prejudice. He declares*to* 'Eddy-the-Person' to *spite* Eddy-the-Person without being aware of the sudden bright irony and affirmation this hits home with. ("I'd love him even if he *was* a person., so there! you horrible *person*" etc.) He declares his 'love of the woods, to spite the trees'. I did have some guilty pleasure in the fact poor Eddy —probably on his last brain cell that 'could even'— was given some absolution *finally*, in such a "shave an a haircut; two bits" declaration. but, after all his graft, they got to somewhere they can build on truth rather then artifice, so long as the love is stronger than the pain and bruises it took to get there. I *know* they can get there now. I just don't know how long it's gonna take, so it seemed insincere to tie down a timeframe. I'm free to DM on our GSS discord or, on the GKS site forum if you want to have a more conversational exchange about it. Massive hugs and love. tDS

2/9/22, 3:59 AM
@The Dirty Spiders Unfortunately, I can't get into Discord. If Martin will allow, he can give you my email. I'll be going in to the hospital again this week so prolly no response for a week at least but you're more than welcome to it

2/10/22, 10:01 PM
@Stroppy Author Contact sent, and please mind yourself friend.
2/10/22, 5:46 AM
Great job! Chase's struggle for dominance is so well-written, and I love how you wrapped things up here.

2/10/22, 9:36 PM
@Hypnothrill ... oh Hypnothrill. You know this isn't the end. Just when I was wrapping up the story, this little devil appeared on my shoulder. Instead of a pitchfork, he prodded me with his "dickfork". (That's a rod with a three pronged cock at the end). Anyways, this little devil coaxed me into writing one last chapter. Now I got to write what this little devil put into my head. While it's work for me, it'll probably bring some enjoyment to the readers. So it's all worth it.
2/10/22, 8:55 PM
You got me leaking at work. Thanks for the story. Do you foresee a back story on how the alpha was transformed?

2/10/22, 9:32 PM
@TexMuscle ... Nope. I think sometimes some questions are best left unanswered. In this case, I don't think an origin story could satisfy. I would rather let readers imagine where this guy came from. I honestly have no idea what his story is. I just know he's searching for his equal. While he didn't find it in the sauna, he did acquire two pups that will bring him enjoyment and companionship.
2/10/22, 7:50 PM
Very hot, but i gotta admit, I was rooting for Chase. I always root for the underdog (see what I did there? Lol) What do you expect from a Mets fan?

2/10/22, 9:26 PM
@Beaner ... when I first conceived this story, I thought most readers would expect Chase to somehow triumph at the last moment. And I tried to really indicate that. But I thought how fun it would be if at the last second, just at his moment of triumph, that Chase would succumb to his carnal desires and be taken. I just thought that would catch the reader off guard. And don't get me wrong, these brothers are very happy pups and have no regrets in being the Alpha's pups. So I'm glad you were rooting for him. But still ... I hope you're happy on where he ended up. If anyone deserves any pity, it's the Alpha. He'll continue to search for a man that will be his equal ... a true partner.
2/10/22, 8:54 PM
Nash seems to be implying that Greyson is a well known dom/top. Makes me wonder if he dominated any of Dallas' friends or teammates prior. great chapter as always!
2/10/22, 8:46 PM
awesome story brah
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2/10/22, 8:46 PM
So many men. So many moocows! If only this were real and we become moocows and could all give all the milk our Herdmaster wants and needs.
2/10/22, 8:05 PM
Oooh, I like this so far! I can't wait to see the rest of it!
2/10/22, 6:54 PM
cant wait for the next part