Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/11/22, 3:56 AM
This is super good! Definitely one of my favorites I'm very curious if there's going to be a chapter 3
Anonymous
2/11/22, 2:06 AM
hot, sad he didn't make it but hot none the less.
2/11/22, 12:42 AM
welcome back! really interested to see where this goes!
2/11/22, 12:05 AM
It's Matt and Drake from the Truth Totem story from before!

2/11/22, 12:34 AM
I think you might be the first person to pick up on that, but yes!@JonDough
Jack
2/11/22, 12:25 AM
Please tell me you guys are going to do more with this series! It's fantastic and I really want to see if this relationship progresses.
Evan
2/11/22, 12:06 AM
Absolute masterpiece. I love this. I thought he was going to manage to mount. Dangling that hope for both the character and the reader. Awesome reversal and really felt his struggle to stay in control. And eventually lose. So, so, so happy you continued this. Brilliant! 11 out of 10. It's got those familiar elements we love but with a new, clever spin. Hot, original, and well-written. What's not to like. And blown away excited that another chapter is coming.
2/10/22, 10:39 PM
I am not much for spandex so I nearly didn't read this. But I am happy that I did. It is a great story.
2/10/22, 10:26 PM
You know, Nash still has an unfucked ass...
2/7/22, 3:47 AM
My friend, I am a three time Cancer patient. I'm not well now and I reflect on my past loves; my past aspirations and my unspoken desires and this echoes them all. I want a clear cut finish. I want completion and the end of the speculation. I am Yarifandeddy (an e.e. cummings reference), in my mind. Your story spoke to me so specifically that I'm moved emotionally. I wish, for your characters the closure I cant or wont have. In my mind, that makes you a very powerful writer.

2/7/22, 7:53 AM
@Stroppy Author First off, mate. Thank you for sharing. I'm quite a bit floored by your post and your situation kinda puts my own angst writing this, to task (there's been tossing, turning, self reflection, appeals for input, uncertainty, insomnia, stuck in the character's heads) but that all seems petty and insignificant compared to cancer survival and life reflection; **Thank you** for being on the journey with me. I promise neither of them are 'shallow inserts' but, I've been both—and have fallen for— 'the Yarif' and 'the Eddy' in my day, and neither position is more enviable or pleasant. In the end, I let their final conversation just be 'them'. I gave them the situation, begun with "hello asshole" and then let them go at it unencumbered by 'a story' or 'an author' any further. My thoughts on the ending and clarity; Yarif declares his love for Eddy goes beyond his stemmed-from-trauma people-prejudice. He declares*to* 'Eddy-the-Person' to *spite* Eddy-the-Person without being aware of the sudden bright irony and affirmation this hits home with. ("I'd love him even if he *was* a person., so there! you horrible *person*" etc.) He declares his 'love of the woods, to spite the trees'. I did have some guilty pleasure in the fact poor Eddy —probably on his last brain cell that 'could even'— was given some absolution *finally*, in such a "shave an a haircut; two bits" declaration. but, after all his graft, they got to somewhere they can build on truth rather then artifice, so long as the love is stronger than the pain and bruises it took to get there. I *know* they can get there now. I just don't know how long it's gonna take, so it seemed insincere to tie down a timeframe. I'm free to DM on our GSS discord or, on the GKS site forum if you want to have a more conversational exchange about it. Massive hugs and love. tDS

2/9/22, 3:59 AM
@The Dirty Spiders Unfortunately, I can't get into Discord. If Martin will allow, he can give you my email. I'll be going in to the hospital again this week so prolly no response for a week at least but you're more than welcome to it

2/10/22, 10:01 PM
@Stroppy Author Contact sent, and please mind yourself friend.
2/10/22, 5:46 AM
Great job! Chase's struggle for dominance is so well-written, and I love how you wrapped things up here.

2/10/22, 9:36 PM
@Hypnothrill ... oh Hypnothrill. You know this isn't the end. Just when I was wrapping up the story, this little devil appeared on my shoulder. Instead of a pitchfork, he prodded me with his "dickfork". (That's a rod with a three pronged cock at the end). Anyways, this little devil coaxed me into writing one last chapter. Now I got to write what this little devil put into my head. While it's work for me, it'll probably bring some enjoyment to the readers. So it's all worth it.