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2/10/22, 7:50 PM
Very hot, but i gotta admit, I was rooting for Chase. I always root for the underdog (see what I did there? Lol) What do you expect from a Mets fan?

2/10/22, 9:26 PM
@Beaner ... when I first conceived this story, I thought most readers would expect Chase to somehow triumph at the last moment. And I tried to really indicate that. But I thought how fun it would be if at the last second, just at his moment of triumph, that Chase would succumb to his carnal desires and be taken. I just thought that would catch the reader off guard. And don't get me wrong, these brothers are very happy pups and have no regrets in being the Alpha's pups. So I'm glad you were rooting for him. But still ... I hope you're happy on where he ended up. If anyone deserves any pity, it's the Alpha. He'll continue to search for a man that will be his equal ... a true partner.
2/10/22, 8:54 PM
Nash seems to be implying that Greyson is a well known dom/top. Makes me wonder if he dominated any of Dallas' friends or teammates prior. great chapter as always!
2/10/22, 8:46 PM
awesome story brah
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2/10/22, 8:46 PM
So many men. So many moocows! If only this were real and we become moocows and could all give all the milk our Herdmaster wants and needs.
2/10/22, 8:05 PM
Oooh, I like this so far! I can't wait to see the rest of it!
2/10/22, 6:54 PM
cant wait for the next part
2/10/22, 6:51 PM
looking forward to how it develops. I think it was a strong choice to mostly skip the parts about maneuvering the parents and Dean so it focuses more on developing from that point
Anonymous
2/10/22, 6:21 PM
Cool story! looking forward to it!
Art
2/10/22, 5:54 PM
Love your writing and this story as much as the first time it was posted. Can't wait for something new!
2/10/22, 5:12 PM
Wow! I know I gave you comments for this story in private, but I regret that I didn't also post them here. I hunted them down, though: "Ahhh, Noam, what a tender and lovely story! So sensual and full of longing! I love how you matched the action to the poem and you manage to do so much vivid texturing of the world in do little time. Thank you so much for the lovely gift!" What I love about about this story really is the sense of yearning and the way that I can imagine exactly how this all went down. So bittersweet.

2/10/22, 5:32 PM
Thank yoouuu, @time.to.occur! It was fun to write this for you and discover a writing gear I didn't know I had.