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2/10/22, 8:46 PM
awesome story brah
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
2/10/22, 8:46 PM
So many men. So many moocows! If only this were real and we become moocows and could all give all the milk our Herdmaster wants and needs.
2/10/22, 8:05 PM
Oooh, I like this so far! I can't wait to see the rest of it!
2/10/22, 6:54 PM
cant wait for the next part
2/10/22, 6:51 PM
looking forward to how it develops. I think it was a strong choice to mostly skip the parts about maneuvering the parents and Dean so it focuses more on developing from that point
Anonymous
2/10/22, 6:21 PM
Cool story! looking forward to it!
Art
2/10/22, 5:54 PM
Love your writing and this story as much as the first time it was posted. Can't wait for something new!
2/10/22, 5:12 PM
Wow! I know I gave you comments for this story in private, but I regret that I didn't also post them here. I hunted them down, though: "Ahhh, Noam, what a tender and lovely story! So sensual and full of longing! I love how you matched the action to the poem and you manage to do so much vivid texturing of the world in do little time. Thank you so much for the lovely gift!" What I love about about this story really is the sense of yearning and the way that I can imagine exactly how this all went down. So bittersweet.

2/10/22, 5:32 PM
Thank yoouuu, @time.to.occur! It was fun to write this for you and discover a writing gear I didn't know I had.
2/10/22, 5:43 AM
wow this is a really hot well written story sequels when brett goes downstairs?

2/10/22, 5:26 PM
@sanfrandave maybe? if it's well received I might do it. I left intentionally the idea of a "group" of people waiting downstairs so...
2/10/22, 3:40 PM
I would love to see hala next

2/10/22, 4:55 PM
@darkblade2814 Can do! I think I know how it will go but I'm always open to suggestions.