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2/10/22, 5:12 PM
Wow! I know I gave you comments for this story in private, but I regret that I didn't also post them here. I hunted them down, though: "Ahhh, Noam, what a tender and lovely story! So sensual and full of longing! I love how you matched the action to the poem and you manage to do so much vivid texturing of the world in do little time. Thank you so much for the lovely gift!" What I love about about this story really is the sense of yearning and the way that I can imagine exactly how this all went down. So bittersweet.

2/10/22, 5:32 PM
Thank yoouuu, @time.to.occur! It was fun to write this for you and discover a writing gear I didn't know I had.
2/10/22, 5:43 AM
wow this is a really hot well written story sequels when brett goes downstairs?

2/10/22, 5:26 PM
@sanfrandave maybe? if it's well received I might do it. I left intentionally the idea of a "group" of people waiting downstairs so...
2/10/22, 3:40 PM
I would love to see hala next

2/10/22, 4:55 PM
@darkblade2814 Can do! I think I know how it will go but I'm always open to suggestions.
hairyartist
2/10/22, 1:39 PM
Thanks Man, Great Chapter!

2/10/22, 4:51 PM
@hairyartist thanks for reading man!
2/10/22, 12:48 PM
With your writing I got to wonder how many pairs of balls you have subjugated, waiting on the next syllable from you, checking back multiple times a day to see it you've posted. Guessing it's more than a few. Your story telling is the equivalent of having the biggest cock in the room...

2/10/22, 4:51 PM
@Currious haha thanks I never thought of it like that
2/10/22, 3:07 PM
This is so sweet and heart-breaking, and I’m glad you didn’t shy away from the pain and reality of their historical situation. I really enjoyed the descriptive writing—this is the kind of thing I’m glad to see on Cupid!

2/10/22, 3:46 PM
Thank you, @Soren Fitz! I owe a lot to Emily Dickonson for inspiring this, and to time.to.occur for providing ED's work as a prompt to begin with. I'm really glad what I was trying to do came across for you.
Fry
2/10/22, 2:02 PM
Seriously hot chapter!! All I can say is please write more!!
Evan
2/10/22, 6:08 AM
A promising start. Eager for more and see where that bite ends up taking Max.

2/10/22, 1:16 PM
@Evan Thank you! Interesting things will be coming!
Anonymous
2/10/22, 12:08 PM
saying "mr. mayor" is a major boner killer.
Zai
2/10/22, 10:18 AM
Hot stuff, dude! You not only paid homage and respect to the original story, you've taken the premise and made it fresh and as Donnie did with Connor... made it your bitch. A+ and 5 gold stars earned for fine storytelling! The only thing missing was some Speedo action like there was in the original. I do so love me some stud Speedo action, lol. Thanks! 🔥🔥🔥🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🔥🔥🔥