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2/9/22, 1:28 PM
This is equal parts scorching hot, intimate, and a little heartbreaking! Well done, guys!

2/9/22, 3:22 PM
That was the goal! It was a whole mess of lust and emotions all tangled up, and it was really fun to work with Josh to thread those things through the story. I'm glad it hit. @Dace
2/9/22, 3:21 PM
is his brother doing this just to humiliate him, or is there more his brother wants?
hairyartist
2/9/22, 2:06 PM
Great chapter Man, Thanks!

2/9/22, 2:21 PM
@hairyartist thanks for reading!
2/9/22, 1:20 PM
i live to serve the virus
Kyle Cicero
2/9/22, 12:43 PM
A great job as usual.

2/9/22, 1:13 PM
@Kyle Cicero thanks man!
2/9/22, 8:48 AM
Really well done! VERY enjoyable story! You write really well. I understood the scene with the phone the same way as you explained it - though I wonder if anyone would take their phone into a hot and steamy environment. It's a difficult scene to convey in such a limited (and empty!) space as a sauna is.

2/9/22, 10:03 AM
@Delicious1papaya ... I actually got this idea because I noticed that when sitting in a sauna, I noticed that other guys would be on their phone. My mind started to wonder if they could be taking pictures of the other guys. And that's how this story came to life. And there is a difference between a sauna and a steam room. Saunas are typically dry, while steam rooms are high in humidity.

2/9/22, 11:17 AM
@rubbrsome That's too funny, because that was also the moment that broke my suspension of disbelief. "Wait, they're in the sauna fully clothed, and they have their cell phones out?" I've been in plenty of saunas, but never one where that was the common practice.

Martin
2/9/22, 11:35 AM
@rubbrsome I guess if someone had their phone with them in a sauna I would seriously question their mental health. First of all, it's not healthy for the phone and secondly, as in most parts of Europe people are naked inside a sauna, it would seriously break privacy. And in a gay sauna, where all kind of things happen all the time, one would even be more afraid that incriminating videos would get out :) That doesn't change that your story was really hot. I'm not into hairy bears or werewolves myself, but as you wrote it, it was amazingly hot as we've get to enjoy from you so many times already!

2/9/22, 11:50 AM
@Hypnothrill its absolutely true. I frequent Eos Fitness, and go to two different locations. At one, the sauna is inside the men's locker room. while the other is a shared sauna between the men and womens locker room. But in both cases, men and women are on their cell phones. And even in the men's locker room sauna, they enter fully clothed. It made me wonder if it's younger generation thing regarding the clothing. But definitely respect thing in regards to the phone. One lady even took a phone call and disturbed the tranquility of the sauna. Anyways, thats how this story got started in my head.

2/9/22, 11:54 AM
@Martin Maybe it's a Utah mentality. You must wear clothes inside the sauna. Its very strange. Theres a sign just outside the door indicating that you need to be wrapped in a towel. But regardless, men enter fully clothed.
JockMC
1/29/22, 1:54 AM
love this one!! Detailed description did make the story quite hot. A jockstrap that controlled the wearer's pennis would help introducing mind control/hypnosis elements to the storyline. For football gear fetish, this one reminds me of sensations when fully suited, from helmet, shoulder, girdle to compression shirt/pant, cleats and so on. Maybe helmet will alter the wearer's mind with subliminal messages, sexual pleasure and electromagnetic signals, with hormone and adrenaline boosted?

2/9/22, 3:04 AM
@JockMC Thanks for your comment and for liking this idea. I was trying to get the sensation of dressing as sensual; I'm glad to see you felt it and liked it. Your ideas are more suited (just happened to be the word I chose) for a sports story. I have an idea for a wrestling story where the headgear does play a role in the mind control. If you want to put all these idea into a story, it would have to be a high school or college setting. But again thanks for reading and liking this idea.
Martin
2/8/22, 9:53 PM
I'm a late reader of this chapter... but I have to chime in to add my praises. This chapter is a lot of exposition, but man how much fantasy and creativity is there inside of you. I wonder where you get this from. What it must be looking like inside of your head. Anyway, I'm looking forward to read the final chapter!

2/9/22, 1:13 AM
@Martin Thank you Cap'n, and I appreciate you reading this even though it's not your normal material.
Martin
2/8/22, 10:04 PM
Such a bitter-sweet story. Forbidden love indeed, and it always invokes anger that people had (and still have) to suffer this. Thank you for this great experience. 5/5 for writing and romance.

2/9/22, 1:05 AM
Thanks, @Martin! I appreciate the feedback :)
2/9/22, 12:16 AM
Im loving this spin on the Pollination series. I can't wait for the next chapter.