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2/8/22, 3:00 PM
@Hypnothrill ... damn! That would have been awesome to include something like that. Frankly, it never occurred to me. I viewed it as more of a lack of respect on Brian's part. Which is why he is transformed into a subservient role. But I wish that I had included this plot point.

2/8/22, 6:44 PM
@rubbrsome Maybe that was just my way of volunteering to be your proofreader/editor again ;-)

2/8/22, 7:05 PM
@Hypnothrill ... You should have an email.

2/9/22, 9:32 PM
@rubbrsome, so, like, you have never gone back to revise and install a new section in a work? I have done that a number of times as i find flow flaws and new directions too. I am so happy to find one of my few Saved Works Authors pumping it out again! ...So to speak.... ;-) What a great way to turn a pup, without all the claws and teeth and blood and stuff. Romantic beastiality. I'm there!

2/9/22, 10:06 PM
@RoboticExperiment3 Thanks! I don't think I've ever written a werewolf or werebear transformation story. I know I've done these alien lizards in a prior story. So this felt a little different, but not too much. And of course, I enjoyed visualizing it in my head.
2/9/22, 7:04 PM
Amazing story! I love the idea and it's so well written. I've enjoyed furry stories before, but this one is off the charts. I'm desperately wishing I could be that third member of the pride 😍
BDJBoy
2/9/22, 3:49 PM
I love that this story has been continuing. its always been one of my favorites! Thank you 😈
2/9/22, 1:28 PM
This is equal parts scorching hot, intimate, and a little heartbreaking! Well done, guys!

2/9/22, 3:22 PM
That was the goal! It was a whole mess of lust and emotions all tangled up, and it was really fun to work with Josh to thread those things through the story. I'm glad it hit. @Dace
2/9/22, 3:21 PM
is his brother doing this just to humiliate him, or is there more his brother wants?
hairyartist
2/9/22, 2:06 PM
Great chapter Man, Thanks!

2/9/22, 2:21 PM
@hairyartist thanks for reading!
2/9/22, 1:20 PM
i live to serve the virus
Kyle Cicero
2/9/22, 12:43 PM
A great job as usual.

2/9/22, 1:13 PM
@Kyle Cicero thanks man!
2/9/22, 8:48 AM
Really well done! VERY enjoyable story! You write really well. I understood the scene with the phone the same way as you explained it - though I wonder if anyone would take their phone into a hot and steamy environment. It's a difficult scene to convey in such a limited (and empty!) space as a sauna is.

2/9/22, 10:03 AM
@Delicious1papaya ... I actually got this idea because I noticed that when sitting in a sauna, I noticed that other guys would be on their phone. My mind started to wonder if they could be taking pictures of the other guys. And that's how this story came to life. And there is a difference between a sauna and a steam room. Saunas are typically dry, while steam rooms are high in humidity.

2/9/22, 11:17 AM
@rubbrsome That's too funny, because that was also the moment that broke my suspension of disbelief. "Wait, they're in the sauna fully clothed, and they have their cell phones out?" I've been in plenty of saunas, but never one where that was the common practice.

Martin
2/9/22, 11:35 AM
@rubbrsome I guess if someone had their phone with them in a sauna I would seriously question their mental health. First of all, it's not healthy for the phone and secondly, as in most parts of Europe people are naked inside a sauna, it would seriously break privacy. And in a gay sauna, where all kind of things happen all the time, one would even be more afraid that incriminating videos would get out :) That doesn't change that your story was really hot. I'm not into hairy bears or werewolves myself, but as you wrote it, it was amazingly hot as we've get to enjoy from you so many times already!

2/9/22, 11:50 AM
@Hypnothrill its absolutely true. I frequent Eos Fitness, and go to two different locations. At one, the sauna is inside the men's locker room. while the other is a shared sauna between the men and womens locker room. But in both cases, men and women are on their cell phones. And even in the men's locker room sauna, they enter fully clothed. It made me wonder if it's younger generation thing regarding the clothing. But definitely respect thing in regards to the phone. One lady even took a phone call and disturbed the tranquility of the sauna. Anyways, thats how this story got started in my head.

2/9/22, 11:54 AM
@Martin Maybe it's a Utah mentality. You must wear clothes inside the sauna. Its very strange. Theres a sign just outside the door indicating that you need to be wrapped in a towel. But regardless, men enter fully clothed.
JockMC
1/29/22, 1:54 AM
love this one!! Detailed description did make the story quite hot. A jockstrap that controlled the wearer's pennis would help introducing mind control/hypnosis elements to the storyline. For football gear fetish, this one reminds me of sensations when fully suited, from helmet, shoulder, girdle to compression shirt/pant, cleats and so on. Maybe helmet will alter the wearer's mind with subliminal messages, sexual pleasure and electromagnetic signals, with hormone and adrenaline boosted?

2/9/22, 3:04 AM
@JockMC Thanks for your comment and for liking this idea. I was trying to get the sensation of dressing as sensual; I'm glad to see you felt it and liked it. Your ideas are more suited (just happened to be the word I chose) for a sports story. I have an idea for a wrestling story where the headgear does play a role in the mind control. If you want to put all these idea into a story, it would have to be a high school or college setting. But again thanks for reading and liking this idea.