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Anonymous
2/7/22, 11:46 PM
I live to serve the virus
2/7/22, 11:18 PM
You weave such an erotic tale. Dog, how I love your writing! You entrance us and bring us into your world -- it's just wonderful. Excited to read more!
2/7/22, 10:54 PM
Rubbrsome, I hope you never stop writing. When i see your name above a new story I have to drop everything and immediately read it. This one is an instant favourite.
2/7/22, 10:53 PM
Your stories are absolutely fantastic and i look forward to reading more and more
2/7/22, 10:51 PM
Grey knows how to work his big brother. What's next, Jack?
2/7/22, 10:18 PM
I absolutely want another chapter of this! excellent story and writing.
2/7/22, 7:01 PM
Nice, short, and sweet story - I loved the descriptions of what he was thinking and experiencing. As well as the ambiguity of where his cock size was coming from, whatever the Seminal Revolution is... lots to ponder about if the Priapist was busy rewriting more reality changes somewhere other than in the chat, or if Jesse just missed the messages. On a narcissistic note, I'm so happy you took my suggestion for a title (as relayed through Kuro :D )

2/7/22, 10:03 PM
Razz TFs helped me design how people respond to Priapist reality changes—I’m glad you enjoyed it! I had fun making it more of an immersive, “live in the story” vibe, and I’m pleased that people accepted the ambiguity—that ambiguity is going to unfold more and more as I post more short stories like this one. Thanks for the read! (Oh, and thanks for the title, too. It was an instant choice.) @Noam de Pluma
Malefiscar
2/7/22, 9:53 PM
Definitely wouldn't mind a second chapter, I think I want to see all three of these characters get a happy ending
Martin
2/7/22, 8:48 PM
Your writing is amazing. So lively. I wish I could write anywhere as good as you. Are you sure you've got the right job? You should be a writer, not a singer. I mean it! This story is very pleasant to read, but of course it's no wanking story at all. Like so many of your stories it's so absolutely fantastic (in the original sense of the word) and special that one can just wonder where you get your ideas from. One thing: Eddy is so very bold. Can you imagine yourself kissing a monster in that situation? Or did he have a thing for monsters all along and just didn't realize it? And his hormones just took over? If I put a normal (young, hapless) man in the position of the monster, I can't see myself doing any of what Eddy did... But ok, he just must be very open and impulsive, right? 😜

2/7/22, 9:43 PM
@Martin Hehe… Boy, I sure hope this story carries on as a fluffy silly tale about infatuation, and not an insurmountable moral knot that is gonna keep it’s author sleepless for about three weeks. I didn’t go into Eddy’s motivations in the writing, (décision artistique, merci beaucoup) but I believe Yarif brought these impulsion out in him. Yarif makes him feel happy, impulsive, in the moment, and that was one of the first big attractions for Eddy, and why he later struggles to glean if he loves him, or if Yarif is simply overloading his otherwise “fine I suppose” life, with happy, silly, impulsive life-living life.
2/7/22, 1:25 AM
Wow, my head is spinning, but I am so proud of Mark, and happy for the both of them and Steve's future! Well done!!

2/7/22, 9:42 PM
@NeedControlling Thank you. Glad you enjoyed the series!