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Ozplays
2/7/22, 12:08 AM
Wish it had been me
2/6/22, 9:21 PM
I must admit. I don't kniw what it us. The britishness the attitude his neediness...yeah i don't like the guy. How did wizard mayor not sock him to death, or muteness. His reaction and engagement on learning Yarif's story makes me disgusted Also reminding too much of CW teen drama.
ObedientSlave
2/6/22, 8:13 PM
whens the next chapter?
2/6/22, 8:09 PM
hi, are you in east London?
2/6/22, 7:58 PM
are u in rotherham?
hairyartist
2/6/22, 2:34 PM
So Hot Man, Thanks!

2/6/22, 6:27 PM
@hairyartist more than welcome!
2/6/22, 4:26 PM
Fantastic Love where this is heading

2/6/22, 6:26 PM
@stimle thanks man
Anonymous
2/6/22, 5:38 PM
great story ...
2/5/22, 3:26 AM
It's hot. I liked the meetings. Do you think you can include photos of Ali and Pranesh.

2/5/22, 1:16 PM
@Superbelt thank you! yeah the meetings were fun to write - especially the thought of a slacker completely dominating such an ambitious dude. i spent the better half of an hour looking for photos but couldn't find the right ones. maybe some of the other readers might be able to help? Pranesh is lanky but surprisingly lean , (maybe think a basketball player?). Typical basic business bro look - clean-shaven, trendy conservative haircut, navy t-shirt and chinos kind of guy. Ali literally just looks like any early-20s kind of slobby gamer/nerd stereotype. Dresses vaguely like they listen to a lot of Simon and Garfunkel. long-ish hair (bit less than shoulder length) but it's noticeably greasy. they're both Desi so I guess they're quite tan but in a light-skinned way. Pranesh is Indian and Ali is Arab. hope that paints a clearer picture! if you have any specific questions, let me know. that's just how i pictured them as i wrote the story

2/5/22, 4:03 PM
maybe Nesh could get to this level - a few months and some vitamin S? https://youtube.com/shorts/sjmuA38xzLw?feature=share @GoodTime

2/5/22, 4:48 PM
@GoodTime personally, I prefer descriptions than photos. I mean, yeah, a pic of a hot stud is always welcome, it's like a cherry on the top of a cake (like you do in your tumblr), it's like a bonus, but I much prefer the way you tell us how a character looks, instead of just put a photo and jump all the delicious details you give to the readers. It's just my opinion, but I had to say it, because one of the things that I enjoy so much in your stories are your descriptions.

2/5/22, 11:15 PM
@Corinthian38 yeah nesh isn't quite there yet, and probably is aiming for something leaner... unless ali has something to say about it 😈

2/5/22, 11:17 PM
@Plymouth58 thank you! yeah i'm a big fan of letting the readers fill in the blank (and maybe self-insert your favourite hottie if that works for you 😉) always appreciate your thoughts on these stories plymouth :)

2/5/22, 11:22 PM
@Superbelt ok actually i found some decent photos that may help. http://hisfactor.com/wp-content/uploads/2016/03/01-Sachin-Bhatt.jpg this guy is older and thus more filled in than nesh, imagine him with less muscles but still lean. sort of like this guy (http://upload.mediatly.com/card_pictures/res/[180]-5cd2c851-bc6e-4c8f-b93e-0933047c526c.jpg) but with softer features

2/6/22, 5:30 PM
Thank you. That helped me. This Sachin Bhatt is really hot. I think he will be my Nesh. Though yeah he looks a little older. But is ok, thnx @GoodTime
2/6/22, 5:20 PM
Holy hell. This is awesome. I love how this has gone so far. The setup is really cool, with cockmages in general and his magic allowing the narrator to know what’s going wrong. Everyone else being oblivious is great. And the magic still affecting the narrator is definitely leading to some hotness. I’m really liking the changes, and how they are building a mystery as to what type of person would make those changes. Can’t wait for more!