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2/6/22, 2:41 PM
so hot
2/5/22, 11:41 AM
another good story from one of the best authors here. wish you'll continue this so as your other series too!

2/5/22, 1:23 PM
@Erratic101 aw shucks that's such high praise! thanks for always supporting and commenting on my stories ☺️ a lot of these stories are just fleshed out fantasies so I'm glad they struck a chord with you. let me know if you have any ideas for Ali's new mindfucked manslave πŸ˜‰

2/6/22, 2:20 PM
@GoodTime I can't stop reading this. I hope you will add the next installment soon! Hoping for Ali to become a more mind fucked slave and more disciplined muscular boy and still oblivious to him being slave. Findom would be an amazing add on to this on top of the humiliation!
2/6/22, 2:16 PM
really enjoyed that, hope he falls
2/6/22, 2:12 PM
Love it so much! Thank you for writing it so great
1/26/22, 5:08 PM
Very hot and so well written, Sir! You have a real talent for getting newbies hooked on grunge 😍

Rubber_Lover14
2/6/22, 12:06 AM
@Taylor ya know what, I've always loved this style of story but I've never known what genre it is. so thank you for saying this. now i know what to look for XD

2/6/22, 12:14 AM
@Rubber_Lover14 You're very welcome! I hope you find more hot ones like this story. I'd love to get a link if you find a particularly hot one 😘

2/6/22, 1:34 PM
@Taylor Why thank you, I'm glad you like it ^^
Rubber_Lover14
1/25/22, 9:20 PM
As i said when i commissioned this, 10/10. great writing, and the commissioner sure has taste πŸ‘€ anyways love the story, cant wait for the rest of the story

2/6/22, 1:26 PM
@Rubber_Lover14 Thank you kindly, yes if the story is any good it's only because the commissioner had such a good idea ^^
2/5/22, 12:59 PM
Loved it.. Would love to hear Henry's story

2/5/22, 1:26 PM
@Buffy67 haha I'm glad Henry caught your eye. He's definitely a future plaything in the making. did you have anything in mind 😈

2/5/22, 1:29 PM
@GoodTime I see the frat boys in a circle including Henry with Pranesh on his knees for the staff meeting haha but would love to see Henry become an evil conspirator with Ali

2/5/22, 1:34 PM
@Buffy67 oh damn that's an intriguing train of thought. what naughty things do you reckon Henry would get up to if he stumbles across Pranesh's trigger phrase πŸŒ€πŸŒ€

2/5/22, 1:37 PM
@GoodTime obviously doing Henry's work.. Blowing him in the lunch room.. Maybe Henry gets Pranesh to start an onlyfans page with the money going to Ali.. Also looking forward to Pranesh being gangbanged in his monkey outfit

2/5/22, 1:49 PM
@Buffy67 complete mental domination with a bit of findom sprinkled in... Henry sounds like my kind of guy πŸ˜‚ Ali probably wouldn't mind sharing his toys if it adds to the humiliation 😈

2/5/22, 1:50 PM
@GoodTime and Henry was such a nice guy before Ali started..

2/5/22, 2:00 PM
@Buffy67 at the end of the day, Henry couldn't resist a clueless and desperate slut at his beck and call πŸ˜‚ Pranesh needed to get taken down a peg anyway. this just let Henry be more inventiv and get a little something for himself too πŸ˜‰

2/5/22, 2:02 PM
@GoodTime very nice and horny.. Maybe Pranesh would make a good cleaner for the office?

2/5/22, 2:09 PM
@Buffy67 hmm yeah i see that. one day Henry catches Pranesh giving himself a day-off as a reward for finishing his 'special projects' early... and not 15 min later Pranesh gets the urge to buy a French maid outfit for a lucrative new 'side hustle' πŸ˜‚ #riseandgrind πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ˆ

2/5/22, 2:11 PM
@GoodTime nice.. I can see that.. Pranesh in a French maids outfit with his hard cock sticking out with a feather duster.. Would make a great picture for his parents

2/5/22, 2:17 PM
@Buffy67 yeah.. Pranesh will beg his single dad to hang it in the sturdy oak frame that used to house his university diploma. his dad was outraged until he got a well-timed phone call...

2/5/22, 2:18 PM
@GoodTime a call from Ali?

2/5/22, 2:20 PM
@Buffy67 yeah the mastermind behind this all 😈

2/5/22, 2:22 PM
@GoodTime be hot to have Pranesh dad on Ali's side

2/5/22, 2:25 PM
@Buffy67 haha damn you're really putting Pranesh through the ringer. what humiliations does his dad contribute?

2/5/22, 2:27 PM
@GoodTime how about Pranesh visits his dad.. Walks into find his dad blowing Henry and Ali

2/5/22, 11:14 PM
@Buffy67 haha like father

2/6/22, 10:55 AM
@GoodTime like father like son*
2/6/22, 9:39 AM
This is hot as hell. Love that you featured some South Asian / Middle Eastern guys, too - nice to see some sexy variety. Am I crazy, though, or did you switch to first-person for a while toward the beginning? Or maybe we just need to head to a conference room and you can explain why I'm mistaken... Really fantastic work - please keep this one going. And I, too, would love to see Pranesh in his monkey suit...

2/6/22, 10:55 AM
@StageShowMM haha nah you're totally right. i switched between first-person/third-person when i was writing and i guess i didn't catch it all πŸ˜‚ definitely need a beta reader lol haha good suggestion... but guess you wouldn't remember if I'd already taken you into a conference room or not. πŸ˜‰ might have to get him to wear it to the company Christmas party. Pranesh will be desperate to wear it exactly the way Abu does though. He's a stickler for accuracy πŸŒ€
2/6/22, 10:47 AM
Would love to hear more about what happened to Dylan in the hypno show ;)
boi98229
2/6/22, 8:05 AM
It was a great surprise and hot hot twist to find that Joshie could use a trigger to strongly entice (?) Devin to bitch for him. I just found the story today, so I definitely want to throw in my vote to encourage a 3rd... and an nth chapter!

Martin
2/6/22, 9:03 AM
@boi98229 😘 Thank you so much. You're certainly encouraging me!