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2/6/22, 9:50 PM
Feels more a heartfelt fantasy story as to porn, though plenty of romantic activities. You once compared this Henda the Weirdo. I can understand meaning. A slight prick of a character more overcoming complex issues experiencing a heartfelt meeting tying into alternate life. It just runs into problem perspective character is tailor made for me to dislike and continuous But in a good way. He isn't a lame self insert. VERY specific and has motives and if not goals habits and interests. But means if not like him or against...man there is no escape. Of course this where the more unstable Yarif enters. If i had to compare him to anyone, its a prototype version of Grizzly from We Bare Bears. Jovial, eager, traumatized, friendly, and just a little ...profoundly dangerous. This was rapidly softened as the show went on but even in pilot he slashed a kid while flinching from calls to the cops. Finally the world building. Not super original, but fun and pleasant enough. It does its job not to, aside where intended, strain the fluffy feelings. Not my thing, due to personal preference. But a nice pleasant experience Honestly feel should be on other venue

2/7/22, 1:06 AM
@Darmani Wowee. Thank you for the substantial feedback. Holy Moly. I agree with most of this, and thank you for being honest about what is and is not 'your thing'. One thing I'll defend is, this is primarily a Gay**Cupid**Story. It is more romance and love then sex/porn/fetish, but then, it was always going to be (if you get me). The reason for also posting on GaySpiral, was, I guess tradition; it's where all the rest of my work is. As time goes on, I'll probably deal with this multi-site business ever better, but for the time being yes, it is a little weak on the sex for a GSS also-ran. Thanks for reading and thanks for the substantial feedback. Really mate; above and beyond. Peace and hugs. tDS.
Ozplays
2/7/22, 12:08 AM
Wish it had been me
2/6/22, 9:21 PM
I must admit. I don't kniw what it us. The britishness the attitude his neediness...yeah i don't like the guy. How did wizard mayor not sock him to death, or muteness. His reaction and engagement on learning Yarif's story makes me disgusted Also reminding too much of CW teen drama.
ObedientSlave
2/6/22, 8:13 PM
whens the next chapter?
2/6/22, 8:09 PM
hi, are you in east London?
2/6/22, 7:58 PM
are u in rotherham?
hairyartist
2/6/22, 2:34 PM
So Hot Man, Thanks!

2/6/22, 6:27 PM
@hairyartist more than welcome!
2/6/22, 4:26 PM
Fantastic Love where this is heading

2/6/22, 6:26 PM
@stimle thanks man
Anonymous
2/6/22, 5:38 PM
great story ...
2/5/22, 3:26 AM
It's hot. I liked the meetings. Do you think you can include photos of Ali and Pranesh.

2/5/22, 1:16 PM
@Superbelt thank you! yeah the meetings were fun to write - especially the thought of a slacker completely dominating such an ambitious dude. i spent the better half of an hour looking for photos but couldn't find the right ones. maybe some of the other readers might be able to help? Pranesh is lanky but surprisingly lean , (maybe think a basketball player?). Typical basic business bro look - clean-shaven, trendy conservative haircut, navy t-shirt and chinos kind of guy. Ali literally just looks like any early-20s kind of slobby gamer/nerd stereotype. Dresses vaguely like they listen to a lot of Simon and Garfunkel. long-ish hair (bit less than shoulder length) but it's noticeably greasy. they're both Desi so I guess they're quite tan but in a light-skinned way. Pranesh is Indian and Ali is Arab. hope that paints a clearer picture! if you have any specific questions, let me know. that's just how i pictured them as i wrote the story

2/5/22, 4:03 PM
maybe Nesh could get to this level - a few months and some vitamin S? https://youtube.com/shorts/sjmuA38xzLw?feature=share @GoodTime

2/5/22, 4:48 PM
@GoodTime personally, I prefer descriptions than photos. I mean, yeah, a pic of a hot stud is always welcome, it's like a cherry on the top of a cake (like you do in your tumblr), it's like a bonus, but I much prefer the way you tell us how a character looks, instead of just put a photo and jump all the delicious details you give to the readers. It's just my opinion, but I had to say it, because one of the things that I enjoy so much in your stories are your descriptions.

2/5/22, 11:15 PM
@Corinthian38 yeah nesh isn't quite there yet, and probably is aiming for something leaner... unless ali has something to say about it 😈

2/5/22, 11:17 PM
@Plymouth58 thank you! yeah i'm a big fan of letting the readers fill in the blank (and maybe self-insert your favourite hottie if that works for you 😉) always appreciate your thoughts on these stories plymouth :)

2/5/22, 11:22 PM
@Superbelt ok actually i found some decent photos that may help. http://hisfactor.com/wp-content/uploads/2016/03/01-Sachin-Bhatt.jpg this guy is older and thus more filled in than nesh, imagine him with less muscles but still lean. sort of like this guy (http://upload.mediatly.com/card_pictures/res/[180]-5cd2c851-bc6e-4c8f-b93e-0933047c526c.jpg) but with softer features

2/6/22, 5:30 PM
Thank you. That helped me. This Sachin Bhatt is really hot. I think he will be my Nesh. Though yeah he looks a little older. But is ok, thnx @GoodTime