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Rubber_Lover14
1/25/22, 9:20 PM
As i said when i commissioned this, 10/10. great writing, and the commissioner sure has taste πŸ‘€ anyways love the story, cant wait for the rest of the story

2/6/22, 1:26 PM
@Rubber_Lover14 Thank you kindly, yes if the story is any good it's only because the commissioner had such a good idea ^^
2/5/22, 12:59 PM
Loved it.. Would love to hear Henry's story

2/5/22, 1:26 PM
@Buffy67 haha I'm glad Henry caught your eye. He's definitely a future plaything in the making. did you have anything in mind 😈

2/5/22, 1:29 PM
@GoodTime I see the frat boys in a circle including Henry with Pranesh on his knees for the staff meeting haha but would love to see Henry become an evil conspirator with Ali

2/5/22, 1:34 PM
@Buffy67 oh damn that's an intriguing train of thought. what naughty things do you reckon Henry would get up to if he stumbles across Pranesh's trigger phrase πŸŒ€πŸŒ€

2/5/22, 1:37 PM
@GoodTime obviously doing Henry's work.. Blowing him in the lunch room.. Maybe Henry gets Pranesh to start an onlyfans page with the money going to Ali.. Also looking forward to Pranesh being gangbanged in his monkey outfit

2/5/22, 1:49 PM
@Buffy67 complete mental domination with a bit of findom sprinkled in... Henry sounds like my kind of guy πŸ˜‚ Ali probably wouldn't mind sharing his toys if it adds to the humiliation 😈

2/5/22, 1:50 PM
@GoodTime and Henry was such a nice guy before Ali started..

2/5/22, 2:00 PM
@Buffy67 at the end of the day, Henry couldn't resist a clueless and desperate slut at his beck and call πŸ˜‚ Pranesh needed to get taken down a peg anyway. this just let Henry be more inventiv and get a little something for himself too πŸ˜‰

2/5/22, 2:02 PM
@GoodTime very nice and horny.. Maybe Pranesh would make a good cleaner for the office?

2/5/22, 2:09 PM
@Buffy67 hmm yeah i see that. one day Henry catches Pranesh giving himself a day-off as a reward for finishing his 'special projects' early... and not 15 min later Pranesh gets the urge to buy a French maid outfit for a lucrative new 'side hustle' πŸ˜‚ #riseandgrind πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ˆ

2/5/22, 2:11 PM
@GoodTime nice.. I can see that.. Pranesh in a French maids outfit with his hard cock sticking out with a feather duster.. Would make a great picture for his parents

2/5/22, 2:17 PM
@Buffy67 yeah.. Pranesh will beg his single dad to hang it in the sturdy oak frame that used to house his university diploma. his dad was outraged until he got a well-timed phone call...

2/5/22, 2:18 PM
@GoodTime a call from Ali?

2/5/22, 2:20 PM
@Buffy67 yeah the mastermind behind this all 😈

2/5/22, 2:22 PM
@GoodTime be hot to have Pranesh dad on Ali's side

2/5/22, 2:25 PM
@Buffy67 haha damn you're really putting Pranesh through the ringer. what humiliations does his dad contribute?

2/5/22, 2:27 PM
@GoodTime how about Pranesh visits his dad.. Walks into find his dad blowing Henry and Ali

2/5/22, 11:14 PM
@Buffy67 haha like father

2/6/22, 10:55 AM
@GoodTime like father like son*
2/6/22, 9:39 AM
This is hot as hell. Love that you featured some South Asian / Middle Eastern guys, too - nice to see some sexy variety. Am I crazy, though, or did you switch to first-person for a while toward the beginning? Or maybe we just need to head to a conference room and you can explain why I'm mistaken... Really fantastic work - please keep this one going. And I, too, would love to see Pranesh in his monkey suit...

2/6/22, 10:55 AM
@StageShowMM haha nah you're totally right. i switched between first-person/third-person when i was writing and i guess i didn't catch it all πŸ˜‚ definitely need a beta reader lol haha good suggestion... but guess you wouldn't remember if I'd already taken you into a conference room or not. πŸ˜‰ might have to get him to wear it to the company Christmas party. Pranesh will be desperate to wear it exactly the way Abu does though. He's a stickler for accuracy πŸŒ€
2/6/22, 10:47 AM
Would love to hear more about what happened to Dylan in the hypno show ;)
boi98229
2/6/22, 8:05 AM
It was a great surprise and hot hot twist to find that Joshie could use a trigger to strongly entice (?) Devin to bitch for him. I just found the story today, so I definitely want to throw in my vote to encourage a 3rd... and an nth chapter!

Martin
2/6/22, 9:03 AM
@boi98229 😘 Thank you so much. You're certainly encouraging me!
boi98229
2/6/22, 6:35 AM
Wow! Thanks for a wonderful story! There are so many things I liked about it, i won't even try to cover them all here. Perhaps your major theme, the question whether mind control and hypnosis usurps free will, just causes shifts in one's preferences and priorities, or does hypnosis control free will *by* shifting the goals and perspectives of the subject, is a fascinating one - rather like Alice's falling down the rabbit hole. Personally i get quite aroused by stories involving consensual/non-consensual activities, so this story was really hot for me for that reason. I thought the idea of having free will during free time was quite an ironic (and arousing!) way of responding to the question of free will. This brings me to another favorite hypnosis concept - establishing and using post-hypnotic triggers. I loved the perfect way in which triggers were used here. I typically like stories to have happy endings with the good guy winning in the end, but sometimes it just feels right when the "bad guy" comes out ahead. As a submissive, it seems perfectly natural to me that a worthy Alpha should come out on top even with some detriment to the sub. I am perfectly happy when the dominant bad guy manages a win-win-win outcome in which everyone wins, but he happens to come out way ahead of everyone else. No matter where the story goes from here, Devin was in desperate need of help that night and in the days ahead. The Adorandus Agency and Mr. Masterson came through for him when he needed it. ...and i am chomping on the bit to find out what happens next... Meanwhile thanks so much again for a great story!!

Martin
2/6/22, 9:02 AM
@boi98229 Oh man, thank you, this means so much to me. You exactly got the point I wanted to make with this series. I actually have an unfinished continuation for this. I have a very good idea where this should go, but I got stuck with the sex scene. I always try to bring a new angle to it, especially to have Devin discovering more things about himself. But this also makes it very hard. I want to give Masterson and the other guys a bit more depth, not just the one-dimensional evil or benevolent character. Maybe that's a bit over-ambitious for such a story... There's a holiday coming up, and I have the feeling that I should really continue my two latest series, they are both very important to me.
2/6/22, 6:39 AM
Miss this story so much, can't wait for the next chapter! Hope you're doing okay!
2/6/22, 4:25 AM
Daaaaaaaang, Dace! So well written! So many lovely turns of phrase and descriptions! > Ian could have sworn he saw Ethan bobbing his head to the same beat for a second Nice sublety :) > The boundaries of self and identity flexed around them for a moment as skin met skin and they folded into each other, touching and groping. Just beautiful. Nicely, nicely done. Oh, and mpreg. Gotta appreciate the mpreg. Keep it coming!
Drohne X7865
2/6/22, 4:23 AM
So mΓΆchte ich auch werden wie der 3 Text
2/6/22, 4:06 AM
Finally got around to this. Nice work man, and congrats on finishing it up!