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2/6/22, 9:39 AM
This is hot as hell. Love that you featured some South Asian / Middle Eastern guys, too - nice to see some sexy variety. Am I crazy, though, or did you switch to first-person for a while toward the beginning? Or maybe we just need to head to a conference room and you can explain why I'm mistaken... Really fantastic work - please keep this one going. And I, too, would love to see Pranesh in his monkey suit...

2/6/22, 10:55 AM
@StageShowMM haha nah you're totally right. i switched between first-person/third-person when i was writing and i guess i didn't catch it all πŸ˜‚ definitely need a beta reader lol haha good suggestion... but guess you wouldn't remember if I'd already taken you into a conference room or not. πŸ˜‰ might have to get him to wear it to the company Christmas party. Pranesh will be desperate to wear it exactly the way Abu does though. He's a stickler for accuracy πŸŒ€
2/6/22, 10:47 AM
Would love to hear more about what happened to Dylan in the hypno show ;)
boi98229
2/6/22, 8:05 AM
It was a great surprise and hot hot twist to find that Joshie could use a trigger to strongly entice (?) Devin to bitch for him. I just found the story today, so I definitely want to throw in my vote to encourage a 3rd... and an nth chapter!

Martin
2/6/22, 9:03 AM
@boi98229 😘 Thank you so much. You're certainly encouraging me!
boi98229
2/6/22, 6:35 AM
Wow! Thanks for a wonderful story! There are so many things I liked about it, i won't even try to cover them all here. Perhaps your major theme, the question whether mind control and hypnosis usurps free will, just causes shifts in one's preferences and priorities, or does hypnosis control free will *by* shifting the goals and perspectives of the subject, is a fascinating one - rather like Alice's falling down the rabbit hole. Personally i get quite aroused by stories involving consensual/non-consensual activities, so this story was really hot for me for that reason. I thought the idea of having free will during free time was quite an ironic (and arousing!) way of responding to the question of free will. This brings me to another favorite hypnosis concept - establishing and using post-hypnotic triggers. I loved the perfect way in which triggers were used here. I typically like stories to have happy endings with the good guy winning in the end, but sometimes it just feels right when the "bad guy" comes out ahead. As a submissive, it seems perfectly natural to me that a worthy Alpha should come out on top even with some detriment to the sub. I am perfectly happy when the dominant bad guy manages a win-win-win outcome in which everyone wins, but he happens to come out way ahead of everyone else. No matter where the story goes from here, Devin was in desperate need of help that night and in the days ahead. The Adorandus Agency and Mr. Masterson came through for him when he needed it. ...and i am chomping on the bit to find out what happens next... Meanwhile thanks so much again for a great story!!

Martin
2/6/22, 9:02 AM
@boi98229 Oh man, thank you, this means so much to me. You exactly got the point I wanted to make with this series. I actually have an unfinished continuation for this. I have a very good idea where this should go, but I got stuck with the sex scene. I always try to bring a new angle to it, especially to have Devin discovering more things about himself. But this also makes it very hard. I want to give Masterson and the other guys a bit more depth, not just the one-dimensional evil or benevolent character. Maybe that's a bit over-ambitious for such a story... There's a holiday coming up, and I have the feeling that I should really continue my two latest series, they are both very important to me.
2/6/22, 6:39 AM
Miss this story so much, can't wait for the next chapter! Hope you're doing okay!
2/6/22, 4:25 AM
Daaaaaaaang, Dace! So well written! So many lovely turns of phrase and descriptions! > Ian could have sworn he saw Ethan bobbing his head to the same beat for a second Nice sublety :) > The boundaries of self and identity flexed around them for a moment as skin met skin and they folded into each other, touching and groping. Just beautiful. Nicely, nicely done. Oh, and mpreg. Gotta appreciate the mpreg. Keep it coming!
Drohne X7865
2/6/22, 4:23 AM
So mΓΆchte ich auch werden wie der 3 Text
2/6/22, 4:06 AM
Finally got around to this. Nice work man, and congrats on finishing it up!
2/6/22, 2:00 AM
I'm so excited every time there's an update! Look forward to the next one.

2/6/22, 2:43 AM
@Some Guy thanks man, makes me day to hear that!
2/6/22, 12:50 AM
Great story and I'm really looking forward to next installment with the other soldier. Would love a role play scene eventually with Marco as the commander before the series ends! Too early now but just wanted to mention it.