Recent Comments

fry
2/4/22, 8:53 PM
Nice story. Please write more chapters!
2/4/22, 8:28 PM
Excellent story I remember reading in the old days! I would certainly throw my vote in with the above for a continuation! Unlike a lot of stories people want sequels to, this one genuinely could use at least another chapter or two.
2/4/22, 8:20 PM
I really like how to the point this story is. Professor Jackson was not playing around! Love how Hector's mentality was transformed so completely so quickly.
2/4/22, 8:10 PM
The careful characterization of the two boys makes this so much sexier. I hope we see Finnegan, ahem, Finn again. I also really appreciate the degree of focus on reducing/eliminating Timothy's heterosexuality, which is a bit of a kink of mine. Rooting for the Baron to win and for his henchmen to catch Timothy! The kid needs more treatment!
2/4/22, 8:01 PM
Really well-done induction scenes!
2/4/22, 7:56 PM
Really excellent slow burn of an opening! I especially like the opening scene where Timothy is hammering the silver into "proper form" despite difficulties - a metaphor for what's to come.
Anonymous
2/4/22, 5:59 PM
very hot is there another part?
2/3/22, 11:44 AM
such a great story.

2/4/22, 5:47 PM
@Jonanator Glad you thought so! Thanks for reading
Anonymous
2/4/22, 3:25 AM
very hot, but i think it could use more hypnotic elements rather than the mc just listening on some head phones, some more details would be fun

2/4/22, 5:47 PM
Definitely agree. Thanks for the tip
Jack
2/3/22, 10:04 PM
I'm a huge fan! I hope this becomes a series, because it was extremely hot and very well written. This was a great first piece.

2/4/22, 5:46 PM
@Jack Thank you so much! Do stay tuned, I have another release coming shortly :) Thanks for reading