Recent Comments

2/2/22, 7:15 AM
This looks promising! Looking forward to seeing the next part of it. One small tip, I would make the mental commands in italics so they’re easier to differentiate.

Spandexlad
2/2/22, 4:35 PM
@Grant Spiral OMG, thank you for saying something. They are in italics in my file but it seems the formatting didn't copy over and that would be very confusing in the next chapter. I'll get this chapter fixed when I can.
GorgeousGeorge
2/2/22, 1:36 PM
I'm so happy that this hasn't been abandoned. I was losing hope, to be honest. Please don't make us wait too long for the next installment.

2/2/22, 3:27 PM
Thanks @GorgeousGeorge, I'm already working on the next chapter.
2/2/22, 10:06 AM
Nice to have you back.

2/2/22, 3:26 PM
Thanks @Nephilim, sorry to have kept you waiting.
Hyphyno
2/2/22, 12:08 AM
So happy to read a new chapter of this amazing series. This was a very hot chapter. I just love the way Dave treats his slaves.

2/2/22, 3:25 PM
Thanks @Hyphyno, it's always great to hear that others are enjoying what you are writing.
2/2/22, 11:59 AM
will they actually get rid of Donnie?

2/2/22, 12:02 PM
@Jonanator Lex doesn't seem to be one to mess around :)

2/2/22, 12:08 PM
@Jack Parker well, I guess this will be wrapping up then if that's the case. Still, over all, great story, I love it.

2/2/22, 12:09 PM
@Jonanator What if I told you this was the end of book one, of what we have plotted as four books?

2/2/22, 12:11 PM
@Jack Parker if that is the case, then I will eagerly be awaiting for more

2/2/22, 12:14 PM
@Jonanator the client and I have plotted out four books, this is the first and has maybe four more chapters. The comes Book Two...which I won't spoil by giving you the name but it is big :)

2/2/22, 12:15 PM
@Jack Parker well then, I think you earned yourself a new fan of your writing, can't wait.

2/2/22, 12:17 PM
@Jonanator https://tenor.com/VLEw.gif
2/2/22, 12:10 PM
awesome story. loved it.
2/2/22, 6:39 AM
Dun-dun-DUN!!!! Loved this part! Super intrigued.

2/2/22, 11:30 AM
@stimle lol thanks man!
2/1/22, 9:30 PM
:D Welcome back

2/2/22, 9:16 AM
Thanks @rayn, sorry for the wait
2/2/22, 8:11 AM
Great story, for me one more chapter where he goes back to patient 109 and says something on the lines of "it feels so good bro, trying to keep it under raps until we can infect the rest of the facility with our goonsticks
2/2/22, 8:07 AM
Oh, surely you're going to continue with this, pleeeease?