Recent Comments

Jan 30, 2022
Anonymous
1/31/22, 6:48 AM
Hot so far, can't wait to see what happens next! Not too keen on gay to straight but once Jonny keeps fucking with guys and not girls and doesn't go on about boobs and vaginas I can't complain.
1/29/22, 7:17 AM
I REALLY hate to be nit picky about this but could you replace shuttered with shuddered. It's really jarring. They don't mean the same thing. Thanks.

1/29/22, 2:27 PM
@Papa Werebear haha yeah I dont really proof read these, I just write when im on my lunch break lol i fixed it

1/31/22, 5:59 AM
@marlinish Thanks and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
1/31/22, 5:23 AM
I'm in love...
thepythia11
1/31/22, 5:11 AM
Oh my word, @stimle, I really love all of your writing, but this series is especially thrilling. I sure do hope there is more to come! But for now, simply, thank you!
1/31/22, 4:22 AM
Perfection. Love the slow and steady burn. I hope there's many more chapters...and thanks for keeping the denial going and keeping it believable...if they all start fucking like rabbits I'm gonna' kill myself lol!
1/31/22, 4:16 AM
This was hot. The woofy stuff a day the butt sniffing was sexy and I hope there is some rimming. Also fucking, that will be nice too. But yeah sexy story, sexy sexy story!
Anonymous
1/31/22, 2:56 AM
wow cant stop reading this story excellent job!
1/31/22, 1:12 AM
Awesome. And I'm a big fan of the tickling and edging.
1/31/22, 12:48 AM
The use of the dream sequence was a very clever way to include a muscle growth sequence in the way that a traditional lover of muscle growth would probably enjoy! I'm not crazy into muscle growth myself so I can't evaluate it based on hotness, but I thought the general idea was well-constructed, the writing is clear even if it has a few errors, and the montage-like muscle growth will certainly satisfy. This is great for a first story, and it looks like you're getting even more traction! I believe in you.
1/31/22, 12:37 AM
Love this world you're building and how you're keeping track of the changes. Reality shift when nobody remembers the change is something I find a lot harder to enjoy, so I'm enjoying seeing Galen understand and reflect on the changes! Hot stuff!