Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/31/22, 2:56 AM
wow cant stop reading this story excellent job!
1/31/22, 1:12 AM
Awesome. And I'm a big fan of the tickling and edging.
1/31/22, 12:48 AM
The use of the dream sequence was a very clever way to include a muscle growth sequence in the way that a traditional lover of muscle growth would probably enjoy! I'm not crazy into muscle growth myself so I can't evaluate it based on hotness, but I thought the general idea was well-constructed, the writing is clear even if it has a few errors, and the montage-like muscle growth will certainly satisfy. This is great for a first story, and it looks like you're getting even more traction! I believe in you.
1/31/22, 12:37 AM
Love this world you're building and how you're keeping track of the changes. Reality shift when nobody remembers the change is something I find a lot harder to enjoy, so I'm enjoying seeing Galen understand and reflect on the changes! Hot stuff!
1/28/22, 4:02 AM
First of all, congratulations on finishing your work. As an author who is similarly inspired by and writing stories based on other authors' stories, I can only envy you at completing your variation. I think you did an amazing job; you definitely maintained the spirit of Absman's original work and yet you found your space within his world to work and created something uniquely yours. That is truly commendable. I have a story in Absman's *Cycle One* universe that is sitting in the Fiction folder; once I get back to working on it I can only hope that it follows in your footsteps and blends the best of Absman's original work and yet explores new area in the fictional universe. Again, congratulations on creating a great work that is your own take on a great piece of fiction.

Ben
1/29/22, 10:42 PM
@New Guy in Town Haha, well it certainly was a labour of love, and thank-you so much. I think you should post it! Don't be scared, your stuff is great (I had a look after I read your comment).

1/30/22, 8:31 PM
@Ben Thanks for the compliment. It's not that I'm scared; I just have a case of writer's block combined with my inherent perfectionism and constant creation of new story ideas that has me stuck as a writer. I'm going back to my first stories and try to finish those off.

Ben
1/31/22, 12:14 AM
No worries @New Guy in Town, I know what that's like. The number of times I've written and then re-written something because I hated the way it read. I'd love to read them when you're done, hope I get first dibs, haha ;) Have you ever written a Pollination story yourself?
1/31/22, 12:14 AM
I've been a big fan of baseball player's physiques since I was a young tween and this chapter definitely knows how to describe that sex appeal to a "solid" effect! Great opening chapter all round!
Iriefal
1/30/22, 11:21 PM
I like the idea of muscular stronger man being submissive, but personally I prefer weaker man to be bottom and be pampered and doted on by his slaves. But, considering, it is not my story, you did damn good job.
SlutForHypno
1/30/22, 11:08 PM
Well this took a bit longer than I thought. It was a bit tough to write seeing as I didn't quite know where to go but am happy with how it ended. Last 2 chapters may take a while as some family stuff (nothing major) came up slowing my progress down. But I already know how everything will end and am very excited for the final chapter. Ended the chapter on a bit of a downer/cliff hanger because if I set it up now, I may not need to write as much next chapter. But the last of the answers and personal issues will be found out next chapter. If anybody is wondering, Yes Mukuro is not a spelling error. Its just a name based off of a character I really like is all. To help readers it is pronounced (Moo-Ker-Oh). Also one important minor note I just didn't want to edit. Spencer and Luke did not actually "enslave" Dean K. In fact I did not mean to put the word "slave" in there or imply such a thing in any way. but it was some typing and I accidentally say it. Obviously Spencer and Luke are trying to help the bois and do not wish to put anybody in servitude, even someone as terrible as Dean K. If you thought such a thing was out of character, its because it would be and im just too lazy to edit. Sorry if you guys were thrown of by that. Thanks as always for your patience and your support. Next Chapter: Luke goes head to head with Mukuro
1/30/22, 6:45 PM
my favorite chapter so far! can't wait to see where this goes