Recent Comments

thepythia11
1/31/22, 5:11 AM
Oh my word, @stimle, I really love all of your writing, but this series is especially thrilling. I sure do hope there is more to come! But for now, simply, thank you!
1/31/22, 4:22 AM
Perfection. Love the slow and steady burn. I hope there's many more chapters...and thanks for keeping the denial going and keeping it believable...if they all start fucking like rabbits I'm gonna' kill myself lol!
1/31/22, 4:16 AM
This was hot. The woofy stuff a day the butt sniffing was sexy and I hope there is some rimming. Also fucking, that will be nice too. But yeah sexy story, sexy sexy story!
Anonymous
1/31/22, 2:56 AM
wow cant stop reading this story excellent job!
1/31/22, 1:12 AM
Awesome. And I'm a big fan of the tickling and edging.
1/31/22, 12:48 AM
The use of the dream sequence was a very clever way to include a muscle growth sequence in the way that a traditional lover of muscle growth would probably enjoy! I'm not crazy into muscle growth myself so I can't evaluate it based on hotness, but I thought the general idea was well-constructed, the writing is clear even if it has a few errors, and the montage-like muscle growth will certainly satisfy. This is great for a first story, and it looks like you're getting even more traction! I believe in you.
1/31/22, 12:37 AM
Love this world you're building and how you're keeping track of the changes. Reality shift when nobody remembers the change is something I find a lot harder to enjoy, so I'm enjoying seeing Galen understand and reflect on the changes! Hot stuff!
1/28/22, 4:02 AM
First of all, congratulations on finishing your work. As an author who is similarly inspired by and writing stories based on other authors' stories, I can only envy you at completing your variation. I think you did an amazing job; you definitely maintained the spirit of Absman's original work and yet you found your space within his world to work and created something uniquely yours. That is truly commendable. I have a story in Absman's *Cycle One* universe that is sitting in the Fiction folder; once I get back to working on it I can only hope that it follows in your footsteps and blends the best of Absman's original work and yet explores new area in the fictional universe. Again, congratulations on creating a great work that is your own take on a great piece of fiction.

Ben
1/29/22, 10:42 PM
@New Guy in Town Haha, well it certainly was a labour of love, and thank-you so much. I think you should post it! Don't be scared, your stuff is great (I had a look after I read your comment).

1/30/22, 8:31 PM
@Ben Thanks for the compliment. It's not that I'm scared; I just have a case of writer's block combined with my inherent perfectionism and constant creation of new story ideas that has me stuck as a writer. I'm going back to my first stories and try to finish those off.

Ben
1/31/22, 12:14 AM
No worries @New Guy in Town, I know what that's like. The number of times I've written and then re-written something because I hated the way it read. I'd love to read them when you're done, hope I get first dibs, haha ;) Have you ever written a Pollination story yourself?
1/31/22, 12:14 AM
I've been a big fan of baseball player's physiques since I was a young tween and this chapter definitely knows how to describe that sex appeal to a "solid" effect! Great opening chapter all round!
Iriefal
1/30/22, 11:21 PM
I like the idea of muscular stronger man being submissive, but personally I prefer weaker man to be bottom and be pampered and doted on by his slaves. But, considering, it is not my story, you did damn good job.