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SlutForHypno
1/30/22, 11:08 PM
Well this took a bit longer than I thought. It was a bit tough to write seeing as I didn't quite know where to go but am happy with how it ended. Last 2 chapters may take a while as some family stuff (nothing major) came up slowing my progress down. But I already know how everything will end and am very excited for the final chapter. Ended the chapter on a bit of a downer/cliff hanger because if I set it up now, I may not need to write as much next chapter. But the last of the answers and personal issues will be found out next chapter. If anybody is wondering, Yes Mukuro is not a spelling error. Its just a name based off of a character I really like is all. To help readers it is pronounced (Moo-Ker-Oh). Also one important minor note I just didn't want to edit. Spencer and Luke did not actually "enslave" Dean K. In fact I did not mean to put the word "slave" in there or imply such a thing in any way. but it was some typing and I accidentally say it. Obviously Spencer and Luke are trying to help the bois and do not wish to put anybody in servitude, even someone as terrible as Dean K. If you thought such a thing was out of character, its because it would be and im just too lazy to edit. Sorry if you guys were thrown of by that. Thanks as always for your patience and your support. Next Chapter: Luke goes head to head with Mukuro
1/30/22, 6:45 PM
my favorite chapter so far! can't wait to see where this goes
1/30/22, 8:51 AM
Super hot!

1/30/22, 6:15 PM
As always, @Jack Parker ... 
1/30/22, 2:09 PM
Fucking hot as always! I can't wait to see Joe finally fucking Frank's hot ass!

1/30/22, 6:15 PM
We shall see!! @Elmara
1/30/22, 2:43 PM
These boys really turn me on. Hottest one yet!

1/30/22, 6:14 PM
Thank you! @TheWalkingAlive
1/30/22, 2:22 PM
Is this, especially the opening based on another story? I had serious deja vu reading it. Very nicely written though

1/30/22, 6:13 PM
@Hypnofiend23 I originally posted this on a different site, but the story is mine
1/30/22, 12:22 PM
On the whole, I like this ending and Mark and Steve's choice to do what is best for them! Pacing-wise, the ending did feel quick, but i guess those aren't things that needed to be dwelled on! Looking forward to your next project!

1/30/22, 6:02 PM
@time.to.occur Thank you! Yes, it was a quick ending, I will admit. I felt it was time to move onto something new as it had become a bit of a long series. Onwards and upwards!
1/30/22, 5:30 PM
Cole's confession is totally, crazy-hot! But so are the other boys' sessions in the confession room. The shift when each has to "read his lines" -- and AGREE with them -- is hugely hot too! The way you describe that gives the reader a glimpse into the hypnotic transition each guy is experiencing. So hot! It'd be awesome reading more of this.
1/30/22, 4:55 PM
Such a world sounds fine to me. ^^ Keep up the cock magic!