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Alexander Weltsch
1/30/22, 9:51 AM
Make him stinky Scotty the teams filthy little star player taking golden showers from the team celebrating victories by licking his teammates sweaty feet and pits. to show what a team player he has . Also I have him stop showering Except golden showers the coach and his team gets them are how are you pissed him self with as he is on now we first had the golden liquid as he calls it now .have him struggle and fight it until he completely gives in and becomes the teams filthy pig you star player and the coaches dirty stinking bitch. As he becomes more filthy and stinky he carries the teams send send musk on him and in him he becomes a better team player as he starts to be leave the musk minds him to his time mates smelling of the piss and sweat tasting there rank feet on his tongue Make him the coaches boy
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1/30/22, 8:16 AM
simply amazing stuff. Subtle and every building. a fantastic read.
1/30/22, 8:16 AM
When are we going to get part four?
1/30/22, 5:16 AM
Quite a hot chapter. The milking will be very interesting.
1/30/22, 5:08 AM
Wow! Please continue!
Jan 28, 2022
1/30/22, 4:57 AM
You had me hard and leaking the whole time! You write so smoothly. The sex starts slowly and then gradually works up to a big finish of thick cum ropes. Great to hear dad was alive and now the boys can have family sex all the time and with other Retreat members, as well! Who would want to leave? I want to live there! Great story and I hope there's more chapters!
1/30/22, 4:55 AM
I have a feeling that Grant did/ will do something that will end up making Malcolm pay him a visit for punishment.
fry
1/30/22, 3:24 AM
Looks like a few years have passed since you wrote this. I would like to see you continue the story if possible? Add in something with Adams friends!
Nox
1/30/22, 2:25 AM
This was a really hot story! I really love that betrayal! <3
1/30/22, 2:21 AM
Thanks. And I'd never heard of "ethical non-monogamy" either. In my day, we just called it "open relationships."