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Jan 28, 2022
1/30/22, 4:57 AM
You had me hard and leaking the whole time! You write so smoothly. The sex starts slowly and then gradually works up to a big finish of thick cum ropes. Great to hear dad was alive and now the boys can have family sex all the time and with other Retreat members, as well! Who would want to leave? I want to live there! Great story and I hope there's more chapters!
1/30/22, 4:55 AM
I have a feeling that Grant did/ will do something that will end up making Malcolm pay him a visit for punishment.
fry
1/30/22, 3:24 AM
Looks like a few years have passed since you wrote this. I would like to see you continue the story if possible? Add in something with Adams friends!
Nox
1/30/22, 2:25 AM
This was a really hot story! I really love that betrayal! <3
1/30/22, 2:21 AM
Thanks. And I'd never heard of "ethical non-monogamy" either. In my day, we just called it "open relationships."
Evan
1/29/22, 11:17 PM
What a great world you're building. Not sexually repressed, actual pleasure education and Utopian environment. And a great prelude. Great writing. I look forward to the main chapters to come!

Zac
1/30/22, 1:26 AM
@Evan Thanks! I really wanted to play with the idea of a hot hypno/dumbing-down/slut story that was based around consent and everyone being happy instead of degradation. Hope I can pull it off!
1/29/22, 11:19 PM
This is off to a wonderful start! Great lore and characterization. I'll definitely be keeping an eye out for more!

Zac
1/30/22, 1:24 AM
@time.to.occur thanks! I took the plunge with publishing the prelude hoping it'll encourage me to keep going and write more.
1/29/22, 11:41 PM
Great start. I'm looking forward to reading this! Malcolm's motivation resonates with me. I'm someone who thinks too much, and the big appeal of being a himbo is letting that all calm down and just indulging in life.

Zac
1/30/22, 1:24 AM
@Derek Williams yeah, I feel the same way sometimes (especially when I read hot himbo fic on here) which is what got me started thinking about this kind of situation.
Anonymous
1/30/22, 12:25 AM
Erotic Iain M Banks fic? Not something I'd considered, but seems obvious in retrospect. Excited to see where you take it!
Evan
1/30/22, 12:13 AM
This has been a delightful take on a hivemind and really cool ride. I look forward to seeing what happens next.