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Nox
1/30/22, 2:25 AM
This was a really hot story! I really love that betrayal! <3
1/30/22, 2:21 AM
Thanks. And I'd never heard of "ethical non-monogamy" either. In my day, we just called it "open relationships."
Evan
1/29/22, 11:17 PM
What a great world you're building. Not sexually repressed, actual pleasure education and Utopian environment. And a great prelude. Great writing. I look forward to the main chapters to come!

Zac
1/30/22, 1:26 AM
@Evan Thanks! I really wanted to play with the idea of a hot hypno/dumbing-down/slut story that was based around consent and everyone being happy instead of degradation. Hope I can pull it off!
1/29/22, 11:19 PM
This is off to a wonderful start! Great lore and characterization. I'll definitely be keeping an eye out for more!

Zac
1/30/22, 1:24 AM
@time.to.occur thanks! I took the plunge with publishing the prelude hoping it'll encourage me to keep going and write more.
1/29/22, 11:41 PM
Great start. I'm looking forward to reading this! Malcolm's motivation resonates with me. I'm someone who thinks too much, and the big appeal of being a himbo is letting that all calm down and just indulging in life.

Zac
1/30/22, 1:24 AM
@Derek Williams yeah, I feel the same way sometimes (especially when I read hot himbo fic on here) which is what got me started thinking about this kind of situation.
Anonymous
1/30/22, 12:25 AM
Erotic Iain M Banks fic? Not something I'd considered, but seems obvious in retrospect. Excited to see where you take it!
Evan
1/30/22, 12:13 AM
This has been a delightful take on a hivemind and really cool ride. I look forward to seeing what happens next.
1/29/22, 11:57 PM
The story has a bit of slapstick to it, with over the top consequences to minor transgressions, and some cartoon moments like answering the phone and the one talking to you is just outside the door and then carries you out like a sack of potatoes. You also have the whole Mulan montage vibe going on. But if you just accept what kind of story you are in it has a lot of hot elements, locking headphones being one of them.
1/29/22, 10:43 PM
I'm curious to see where this is headed!
1/29/22, 10:35 PM
Well, that was just great fun! Thank you for your contribution to this wonderfully weird universe! I really enjoyed this!

Ben
1/29/22, 10:40 PM
Thank-you@absman420! Very glad you enjoyed it :)