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1/30/22, 4:20 PM
great chapter! this series is really gearing up to be crazy hot!
1/30/22, 2:59 PM
Awesome start! Very much looking forward to more!!
1/30/22, 2:44 PM
Love it so far!
1/30/22, 1:02 PM
ill you ever continue this?
easdf
1/30/22, 12:41 PM
I'm really glad you're back!
Alexander Weltsch
1/30/22, 9:51 AM
Make him stinky Scotty the teams filthy little star player taking golden showers from the team celebrating victories by licking his teammates sweaty feet and pits. to show what a team player he has . Also I have him stop showering Except golden showers the coach and his team gets them are how are you pissed him self with as he is on now we first had the golden liquid as he calls it now .have him struggle and fight it until he completely gives in and becomes the teams filthy pig you star player and the coaches dirty stinking bitch. As he becomes more filthy and stinky he carries the teams send send musk on him and in him he becomes a better team player as he starts to be leave the musk minds him to his time mates smelling of the piss and sweat tasting there rank feet on his tongue Make him the coaches boy
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1/30/22, 8:16 AM
simply amazing stuff. Subtle and every building. a fantastic read.
1/30/22, 8:16 AM
When are we going to get part four?
1/30/22, 5:16 AM
Quite a hot chapter. The milking will be very interesting.
1/30/22, 5:08 AM
Wow! Please continue!