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1/29/22, 10:35 PM
Well, that was just great fun! Thank you for your contribution to this wonderfully weird universe! I really enjoyed this!

Ben
1/29/22, 10:40 PM
Thank-you@absman420! Very glad you enjoyed it :)
Martin
1/29/22, 8:29 AM
The tag "ENM" is supposed to mean "ethical non-monogamy", isn't it? I try to cut down the number of tags, so I wonder if we can't use "polyamorous" instead. Or create this as an alias.

Anonymous
1/29/22, 8:46 AM
Seriously hot - please continue!

1/29/22, 1:34 PM
@Martin It also means "embarrassed male nudity" for situations where the relevant kink involved consists solely of being turned on by watching other guys who are naked in situations of embarrassment. I couldn't find another tag that fit that well. There's not a CMNM or CFNM tag either. I'm open to suggestions.

Martin
1/29/22, 9:51 PM
@Evelded Ok, then let's keep the tag. I'm not a fan of obscure abbreviations, but the term is just way too long to be used as a tag itself.
Jan 28, 2022
EntrancedGay92
1/29/22, 9:22 PM
This sounds like the type of place I'd love for my own father to move to and "trick" me into visiting. Great work, as always.
fry
1/29/22, 7:46 PM
A sequel would be nice. Spend a bit more time developing the mind control and sex situations to make it more erotic.
1/29/22, 7:13 PM
I had thought the fisherman would be made to swell a little too, perhaps feeling immense pleasure and tittilation as it occurs and convince him to surrender to a life of service. more installments of this, please! this is great stuff!
Jan 28, 2022
1/29/22, 4:57 PM
What a sexy story, I always love a video or audio induction! The only thing was it didn't feel realistic and by that I only am referring to a Florida home having no AC. :)

1/29/22, 7:02 PM
@groupple I was thinking about that right before I posted! I was about to take that sentence out, but I needed some reason for the brothers to change into the clothes we see in the first picture. But I figure that fans, showers, and constant nudity are enough to keep Carl cool.
1/29/22, 5:46 PM
So he is no longer belongs to Donnie?
1/29/22, 4:33 PM
I liked this story well enough, it is a fine muscle growth story and does include a lot of the usual good stuff. I liked some of the more original inclusions such as locking headphones and how the POV character's opinion on them changes over time. I did notice some suspect grammar and typos, especially from the section where the POV character is beginning to settle into a routine onwards but I don't blame you. I can't imagine it having been easy to keep the grammar consistent with what is essentially a written montage sequence. Also on a personal taste level, really appreciated the highlighting of a beard on Payton, he struck me as the sort of guy who'd go completely hairless but I do like me a good beard :P
1/29/22, 4:24 PM
What a fascinating story! You do a great job humanizing all of the characters (even the god), and the descriptions of both Aegeus's and Poseidon's growth are hot as hell. Amazing work!