Recent Comments

1/29/22, 11:41 PM
Great start. I'm looking forward to reading this! Malcolm's motivation resonates with me. I'm someone who thinks too much, and the big appeal of being a himbo is letting that all calm down and just indulging in life.

Zac
1/30/22, 1:24 AM
@Derek Williams yeah, I feel the same way sometimes (especially when I read hot himbo fic on here) which is what got me started thinking about this kind of situation.
Anonymous
1/30/22, 12:25 AM
Erotic Iain M Banks fic? Not something I'd considered, but seems obvious in retrospect. Excited to see where you take it!
Evan
1/30/22, 12:13 AM
This has been a delightful take on a hivemind and really cool ride. I look forward to seeing what happens next.
1/29/22, 11:57 PM
The story has a bit of slapstick to it, with over the top consequences to minor transgressions, and some cartoon moments like answering the phone and the one talking to you is just outside the door and then carries you out like a sack of potatoes. You also have the whole Mulan montage vibe going on. But if you just accept what kind of story you are in it has a lot of hot elements, locking headphones being one of them.
1/29/22, 10:43 PM
I'm curious to see where this is headed!
1/29/22, 10:35 PM
Well, that was just great fun! Thank you for your contribution to this wonderfully weird universe! I really enjoyed this!

Ben
1/29/22, 10:40 PM
Thank-you@absman420! Very glad you enjoyed it :)
Martin
1/29/22, 8:29 AM
The tag "ENM" is supposed to mean "ethical non-monogamy", isn't it? I try to cut down the number of tags, so I wonder if we can't use "polyamorous" instead. Or create this as an alias.

Anonymous
1/29/22, 8:46 AM
Seriously hot - please continue!

1/29/22, 1:34 PM
@Martin It also means "embarrassed male nudity" for situations where the relevant kink involved consists solely of being turned on by watching other guys who are naked in situations of embarrassment. I couldn't find another tag that fit that well. There's not a CMNM or CFNM tag either. I'm open to suggestions.

Martin
1/29/22, 9:51 PM
@Evelded Ok, then let's keep the tag. I'm not a fan of obscure abbreviations, but the term is just way too long to be used as a tag itself.
Jan 28, 2022
EntrancedGay92
1/29/22, 9:22 PM
This sounds like the type of place I'd love for my own father to move to and "trick" me into visiting. Great work, as always.
fry
1/29/22, 7:46 PM
A sequel would be nice. Spend a bit more time developing the mind control and sex situations to make it more erotic.