Recent Comments

1/29/22, 4:33 PM
I liked this story well enough, it is a fine muscle growth story and does include a lot of the usual good stuff. I liked some of the more original inclusions such as locking headphones and how the POV character's opinion on them changes over time. I did notice some suspect grammar and typos, especially from the section where the POV character is beginning to settle into a routine onwards but I don't blame you. I can't imagine it having been easy to keep the grammar consistent with what is essentially a written montage sequence. Also on a personal taste level, really appreciated the highlighting of a beard on Payton, he struck me as the sort of guy who'd go completely hairless but I do like me a good beard :P
1/29/22, 4:24 PM
What a fascinating story! You do a great job humanizing all of the characters (even the god), and the descriptions of both Aegeus's and Poseidon's growth are hot as hell. Amazing work!
Tim
1/29/22, 3:26 PM
I need some bbc
1/29/22, 2:28 PM
This story is so hot. I need to be propositioned like this soon!
1/29/22, 2:09 PM
ok that plot twist where the tables get turned on Todd and he's gets turned into a disciplined preppy like Chance used to be was so hot!
1/29/22, 9:22 AM
this was fun sexy and cute! i love this series because its kinky as hell bit everyone is happy with the changes!
1/29/22, 1:44 AM
Thank you!! Great to see Absman's stories revisited and recreates by younger generations of MC/MG writers!
Jan 28, 2022
1/29/22, 1:41 AM
Didn't find it particularly dark, but hot as always. I loved how Beau in the end was just happy to please his dad. Also, when I saw the tat's description and the Chris and Beau names, I immediately remembered the scene. Great choice!
Jan 27, 2022
1/28/22, 6:55 PM
This was a rollercoaster of a story: in a good way. The sensuality and details in the beginning really held my interest. This being my first size play story was also fun and you did a great job articulating the fun aspects of it. Then the ending. As someone with panic attacks, it was very real and powerful and validating. The romance and the symbiosis between the couple made me pause and really evaluate what love can be.

1/29/22, 12:37 AM
@astrologus Thanks for reading! I'm happy to have been your first size play story (as it's probably my favorite kink), and that the story held your interest. I have had panic attacks on and off as well, and I hope from your review that I did it justice while still telling an ok story. I was hesitant to publish this story since it's a little unusual for a first post, but if even one other person found it validating and sensual, then it was worth it. :D
1/28/22, 10:56 PM
Even with all the expository stuff at the end -- the "rules" -- it was a sexy read and my dick stayed nice and hard. Well done!