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Jan 28, 2022
1/29/22, 1:41 AM
Didn't find it particularly dark, but hot as always. I loved how Beau in the end was just happy to please his dad. Also, when I saw the tat's description and the Chris and Beau names, I immediately remembered the scene. Great choice!
Jan 27, 2022
1/28/22, 6:55 PM
This was a rollercoaster of a story: in a good way. The sensuality and details in the beginning really held my interest. This being my first size play story was also fun and you did a great job articulating the fun aspects of it. Then the ending. As someone with panic attacks, it was very real and powerful and validating. The romance and the symbiosis between the couple made me pause and really evaluate what love can be.

1/29/22, 12:37 AM
@astrologus Thanks for reading! I'm happy to have been your first size play story (as it's probably my favorite kink), and that the story held your interest. I have had panic attacks on and off as well, and I hope from your review that I did it justice while still telling an ok story. I was hesitant to publish this story since it's a little unusual for a first post, but if even one other person found it validating and sensual, then it was worth it. :D
1/28/22, 10:56 PM
Even with all the expository stuff at the end -- the "rules" -- it was a sexy read and my dick stayed nice and hard. Well done!
Jan 28, 2022
1/28/22, 10:34 PM
Saw another Hypnothrill and jumped right into it...and of course it doesn't disappoint as usual! ;) I admire how you can always cleverly make use of the characters' hidden weaknesses inside and leverage that as a bait to lure them into the brainwashed harem. I know this is probably one of your one-off stories, but it would be interesting to know more about the background of the Retreat and the life within.
1/28/22, 7:49 PM
The pacing was hard and fast, but you really kept everything together well and I felt like I knew what was going on the whole time. Going to read some more!
1/28/22, 5:36 PM
im so glad to see you back working on this!

1/28/22, 5:43 PM
@Nodara it's long overdue! I'm making a conscious effort to write some more this year, so hopefully I can keep things going!
Jan 28, 2022
1/28/22, 4:58 PM
Another awesome story! I love when families come together.
Jan 28, 2022
1/28/22, 3:58 PM
A happy family reunion. Would be interesting to see how the father got roped into the Retreat in the first place.

1/28/22, 4:21 PM
@yamaritsu96 It's one of my patented "happy-yet-horrific" endings. Yes, Beau and Chris are no longer estranged from each other or their father (and they finally get some of the paternal praise they'd always been longing for). But their dad is still a narcissistic addict who's exploiting them; he's just now addicted to this sex cult rather than to alcohol. I tried to insinuate that he was easy prey for the Retreat because he was just substituting one mind-altering addiction for another.
Jan 28, 2022
1/28/22, 4:03 PM
A hot story, but I confess that incest doesn't do anything for me, so it is not my favorite. Don't get me wrong, the writing is fantastic! And just because it's not for me, that doesn't mean other people won't enjoy it.
screamingmoist
8/31/20, 4:05 PM
I kept going back and forth on whether or not to have Troy join them. Might pick that thread up in a later story, but I need to figure the best way to do it.

Doug
7/9/21, 9:15 AM
@screamingmoist go for it. This needs

7/9/21, 12:28 PM
@screamingmoist why not make troy a papa wolf

1/27/22, 10:42 PM
@screamingmoist I'm very curious as to what Troy would pick for himself. A combo of Lance's muscle, Blane's ass, and Duke's libido? Or be an enormous muscle leather daddy bear to the changed trio?

screamingmoist
1/28/22, 2:55 PM
@Cutlerfan thats a tough one. I feel like he's generally happy with himself, but I have to imagine that the temptation would be strong after watching his friends get away with their new lives. He'd probably go with something more freeing from a behavior standpoint than a physical change, like getting to wear as little as he wanted, or a ramped up libido that he could indulge whenever. Maybe a few physical tweaks, but more of the contextual stuff.