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Jan 28, 2022
1/28/22, 3:58 PM
A happy family reunion. Would be interesting to see how the father got roped into the Retreat in the first place.

1/28/22, 4:21 PM
@yamaritsu96 It's one of my patented "happy-yet-horrific" endings. Yes, Beau and Chris are no longer estranged from each other or their father (and they finally get some of the paternal praise they'd always been longing for). But their dad is still a narcissistic addict who's exploiting them; he's just now addicted to this sex cult rather than to alcohol. I tried to insinuate that he was easy prey for the Retreat because he was just substituting one mind-altering addiction for another.
Jan 28, 2022
1/28/22, 4:03 PM
A hot story, but I confess that incest doesn't do anything for me, so it is not my favorite. Don't get me wrong, the writing is fantastic! And just because it's not for me, that doesn't mean other people won't enjoy it.
screamingmoist
8/31/20, 4:05 PM
I kept going back and forth on whether or not to have Troy join them. Might pick that thread up in a later story, but I need to figure the best way to do it.

Doug
7/9/21, 9:15 AM
@screamingmoist go for it. This needs

7/9/21, 12:28 PM
@screamingmoist why not make troy a papa wolf

1/27/22, 10:42 PM
@screamingmoist I'm very curious as to what Troy would pick for himself. A combo of Lance's muscle, Blane's ass, and Duke's libido? Or be an enormous muscle leather daddy bear to the changed trio?

screamingmoist
1/28/22, 2:55 PM
@Cutlerfan thats a tough one. I feel like he's generally happy with himself, but I have to imagine that the temptation would be strong after watching his friends get away with their new lives. He'd probably go with something more freeing from a behavior standpoint than a physical change, like getting to wear as little as he wanted, or a ramped up libido that he could indulge whenever. Maybe a few physical tweaks, but more of the contextual stuff.
1/28/22, 10:26 AM
God I absolutely can't wait for the next chapter! It's an amazing series
Anonymous
1/28/22, 6:56 AM
Hoping this series will continue? I'm really looking forward to the first person perspective from Travis when he finally uses Top View!
1/28/22, 6:30 AM
This is such a great start, looking forward to the next chapters.
1/28/22, 6:18 AM
I think this is a great setup. It's nice to see such a real and balanced response to Jake's dilemma of what he has done.
1/28/22, 3:27 AM
Ah, delightful! I love this, Soren, well done!!

1/28/22, 4:23 AM
I'm glad you enjoyed it! This is new territory for me, I'm glad I did well!! @Dace
1/28/22, 3:30 AM
Brilliant. I love that Tanner didn't have to (or want to) resort to his hypnotic powers to make Devon submit this way - manipulating his father was more effective! And of course, hot as hell from the get-go. Great work man!