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Mar 12, 2012
fry
1/27/22, 9:04 PM
Any chance of additional chapters??
Jan 25, 2022
1/27/22, 1:03 PM
Wow, another incredible story, what a pleasure to read you every time, I think you are the best writer of perverse stories including superheroes. it's so exciting to discover how a superhero is defeated by his enemy, in addition with the help of his boyfriend, beautiful irony of fate
1/27/22, 7:33 PM
@Chrisco1212 Thank you! I have a few more hero stories written or in progress on their way in the near future :)
Jan 25, 2022
1/26/22, 7:58 AM
A really good story as others have said to get his boyfriend to help in the conversion makes it even hotter for me. liked how oliver said that Web Slinger was to stop fighting crime, if there is another chapter i would like to see Web Slinger costume changed to sinister black and he is now doing the crimes for his new dark Master
1/27/22, 7:33 PM
@MalSkin Thank you! I didn't intend for a sequel but I will keep that in mind :) And I thoroughly enjoyed making Oliver a complete slave during the takeover.
Jan 25, 2022
1/25/22, 11:18 PM
Awesome! I really love it when someone close to the victim betrays them and has a hand in taking them down. This was great and welcome back!
1/27/22, 5:58 PM
@Kyle Chu Thank you! I quite enjoyed writing in this perspective - it was a fun story. I have more stories written so I will try to get those out soon!
Jan 25, 2022
1/25/22, 10:40 PM
I'm a sucker for a superhero gets mind-controlled. Nice twist in this, too, by having the boyfriend be the instrument. Well done!
1/27/22, 5:53 PM
@absman420 thank you! Glad you liked it :) I have a few more mind wiped hero stories coming soon - well as time permits.
Jan 27, 2022
Cracker
1/27/22, 5:50 PM
Another hot story
Jan 24, 2022
Anonymous
1/27/22, 4:01 PM
I cannot wait to read the next chapter.
Jan 27, 2022
Anonymous
1/27/22, 3:34 PM
I want to write a long comment to show how much I appreciate and enjoy this story, but I'm kinda busy so I'll make it short. Your story is amazing.
Jan 26, 2022
Wolfy
1/27/22, 1:48 PM
Interesting chapter and an interesting show of power play. It will be interesting to see how Mark reacts to Steve's "non-comment" comment. Honestly, if I were in the situation, I would have done what Steve did and hope my Master/Owner didn't get mad about it because he was fulfilling a role for the company and not as his husband's toy. I would also like to think that Mark would understand that and not be emasculated by it because Mr. Rashid placed Steve in a very difficult position... one Steve didn't want to mess up. If he had replied his Master's, well it could have emasculated Mr. Rashid, which could lose the company the business and leave bad marks for Steve and Mark as a whole. At the same time, Mr. Rashid could also not be emasculated knowing that Steve's loyalty was to his owner/master above all other's. However, it also becomes a quandry because while at the office, as an intern, he is property to be used by everyone. If Steve had answered Mr. Rashid, lying to save grace, it would have even further possibly emasculated Mark in front of all the men there, angering him and so on. It could have also angered Mr. Rashid and could have still left bad marks for Steve for his disloyalty to the man that owned him. On the other hand, it could have pleased Mr. Rashid while bolstering his own ego. Obviously, regardless of the route that was taken, not a single option would have been a good one to take with solid and confirmed results. Therefore, the silence was the better option overall while hoping things weren't messed up between Mark and Steve. If Mark was more of a Dom and a better Dom overall... well... this problem wouldn't be an issue, but Mark not committing to being a Dom is more causing the lines to be blurred for him and putting Steve in a harder position. Their love and caring for one another can't be helped though because of their relationship as husbands. It'll be interesting, for sure, to see how things play out! Hell... even my comment here might affect how you go about the direction of the story and Mark's reaction. That isn't intended, of course, but I know how comments can create those nasty ear-worms that won't leave your brain alone... lol.
1/27/22, 2:10 PM
@Wolfy Yes, the power play was really interesting to write, especially with subverting the typical Dom/sub relationship. It was great to have Steve using his submission to wield power over the other men! The next chapter will definitely be an interesting chapter. You've made some interesting points there. A lot of food for thought! I had envisaged where it was going to go but I now I may have to look at it from a different angle. I'll make it work for sure and it will be hot nonetheless!
Anonymous
1/27/22, 2:17 PM
@Henry Wolf hehe, good to hear and I look forward to what comes next. Out of curiosity, are you more a Dom or Sub?
Wolfy
1/27/22, 2:26 PM
@Henry Wolf just so you know, that was me as the anonymous commenter... I am not logged in here on my phone and that's where I replied from. Speaking of, if you'd like to chat directly with me, feel free to reach out and contact me through my profile here. That way we can discuss more ideas and things to bounce off of one another for our respective stories.
1/27/22, 2:28 PM
@ I guess I would be more a sub? But Steve's journey has me questioning that I'm not completely sub, I think more of an active sub/power sub if that's even a thing? haha
1/27/22, 2:37 PM
@Wolfy I'd love to chat to you directly. Stupid question, how do you do that? I'm not sure how to do it on this if you could maybe let me know? Or we could email/use Twitter?
Wolfy
1/27/22, 2:40 PM
@Henry Wolf I mean... why not? Being a power bottom is a thing, so being a power sub could be? I mean... being a sub, it's all about serving and not caring about one's self in the action of pleasing your Sir. It sounds like you'd be more versatile, not being pure sub nor pure dom. Personally, I know I am full sub and full pup... always have been and just didn't put it to words until recently. It would also seem like you get more enjoyment out of being the dom, don't you Sir?
Wolfy
1/27/22, 2:41 PM
@Henry Wolf I recently followed you on Twitter, we can start there and move elsewhere after.
Jul 26, 2020
Harry
9/5/21, 12:59 AM
Hello I really like your story I found it very funny although I would have liked to know what happened to the campers after that and I would like you to continue the story
ghostwriter
9/5/21, 3:44 PM
Thanks for the comment! There's actually a part 5 and 6 to the ghosts' adventures, but they don't involve the campers. I've always thought of the campers' plot as a stand-alone story with not continuation, but seeing how much people like it, I might consider bringing the campers back! @Harry
Harry
9/6/21, 8:07 AM
@ghostwriter You're welcome and thank you very much for answering me I did not expect you to do it and it is great that you think about bringing back the campers to know what happened to them by the way I have a question the changes that ghosts make in the bodies of humans are permanent as per Example Eddie who made Larry's buttocks and cock bigger that would mean that now his buttocks and cock are bigger or also when they expanded the butt of the boys so that their cocks will enter that would also mean that now their butts will stay so
ghostwriter
1/8/22, 7:18 PM
i never meant for their bodies to stay that way, but you make a compelling case, i just might consider the idea!! @Harry
Harry
1/27/22, 5:50 AM
@ghostwriter Great, by the way, what other ideas do you have, for example, that ghosts possess heterosexual boys again, that's what I would like or that when they do, the boys are aware and try to resist seriously, I hope you continue the story please