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chen
1/24/22, 9:56 AM
Good writing! but this article will not update in this website? it will only continue in patreon?

SC Walker
1/26/22, 5:38 PM
Patreon will get to read my stories early, but I will start posting the reboot here soon. @chen
1/26/22, 4:03 PM
Fuck. Just fuck. This story, from rocky start to incredible end, was just amazing. I can't remember how many times I have cummed and cried. The plotline, the character development, the joy, the sorrow, I loved every bit of it. I can't speak for others who have read this story, but I don't want it to end here. This is the end of a of an adventure with a bad beginning, but it can also be the beginning of a great one. I sincerely hope that there will be a sequel book to this. Even if you decide against, I don't think that my imagination will keep me from thinking of different future scenarios. All in all, I say to you with the utmost gratitude, Thank You.
1/25/22, 10:18 PM
Wow, that was interesting and hot. can't wait for more. I think this has become another favorite story of mine, personally because I think Asian guys are hot.

1/26/22, 9:28 AM
I am flustered by this, thank you very much more chapters to come i hope you continue to read the series @Jonanator

1/26/22, 3:01 PM
@Hypnobot you bet I'll continue reading in. mind if I send you a personal note later. I'd like to chat with you, if that's alright with you.

1/26/22, 3:27 PM
sure go ahead@Jonanator

1/26/22, 3:27 PM
sorry for the late replies we live in different timezones i believe@Hypnobot

1/26/22, 3:28 PM
@Hypnobot it's fine. and great🙂

1/26/22, 3:30 PM
@Hypnobot I'm curious now, where do you live exactly. I live on the East Coast of the U.S.

1/26/22, 3:31 PM
I live in the Philippines @Jonanator

1/26/22, 3:36 PM
@Hypnobot that's awesome. always wanted to visit there. well, most of Asia really. I love the rich history it has. I find it quite fascinating. guy why I find Asian guys hot, at least in my opinion.

1/26/22, 3:44 PM
well your'e not wrong, it indeed has a deep sense of culture and history and as well as a good number of good looking guys worthy of simping for. If you really want to cpntinue to chat you can reach me through my email, i will reply anytime that i am awake or notified about your email.@Jonanator

1/26/22, 3:45 PM
@Hypnobot sounds great. what is your email.

1/26/22, 3:49 PM
Jcuison559@gmail.com@Jonanator

1/26/22, 3:51 PM
@Hypnobot great. I'll shoot you an email.
Evan
1/26/22, 1:16 PM
I enjoy the idea behind this and I'm curious where you'll take out, what sort of challenges and temptations and traps await. If I may offer some advice, you have a lot of action being explained to us rather than feeling it through the eyes of the characters. The guys are all a bit interchangeable right now too, they haven't had a chance to become people before Asmodeus pounced on them. Tanner is obviously a selfish asshole so that's staying to differentiate him from the rest. Thanks for sharing your story! looking forward to more.

1/26/22, 3:51 PM
@Evan i totally agree with your character building comment, and i tried to be mindful of it. i purposefully was trying to keep the reader with only the same information the boys have, which right now their information only being purely surface level. they just woke up in this place, i wanted to throw them into the thick of it to set the tone of the story going forward. i want the boys (and readers) to slowly learn more about each other through out the journey. its going to be a slow burn, they need to break down eachothers walls, learn to trust each other with their deepest darkest secrets, and chose either to work with or against each other. i loved hearing your perspective though, its hard to try to understand the story from a readers perspective when you know the whole unwritten plot lol please keep commenting it helps a lot
Blakenikolas
1/26/22, 3:31 PM
glad it didn't gowhere i thought it was gonna
1/24/22, 11:11 PM
How is the device changing him? i could fatten him up

1/26/22, 3:27 PM
@Iorek in a very simple way is hormones restructuring fatty tissue at an accelerated timeline, obviously, fiction. The human body can't function without hormones because they promote everything in every organ, if you could change the direction, speed and design of said hormones, theoretically speaking, you could edit the human body in certain ways, as in, breast augmentation, etc.
1/26/22, 1:42 PM
Fucking amazing. The detailed descriptions are so damn hot.
Tmp1142
1/26/22, 1:15 PM
Hope we get more of this story some day!
1/26/22, 12:58 PM
I'm loving this, Cant wait for a scene at his school and how everyone will react, and how he will use his old bully
1/26/22, 12:40 PM
Oh my god.. So good to have you back on this story. It was perfection