Recent Comments

1/26/22, 6:41 AM
Beautifully paced. I love how the POV heightens the action and makes everything more immediate and sexy. I'm a fan.
1/26/22, 6:20 AM
I'm just sick with jealousy that you told a story like this before I had a chance to. :) Obviously you know your stuff. I hope there's more to come.
Anonymous
1/26/22, 4:01 AM
Very sexy. I enjoyed the way the reality change played out with "no, that can't be right" but then the horniness wins out over the skepticism. That Jesse then blew an impossibly huge load all over himself was the icing on top.

1/26/22, 5:24 AM
I brainstormed with various friends over these reality change mechanics for a good while, and I'm really glad I settled on what you pointed out—there's a moment of "no, that can't be right" like you mentioned, but it slowly passes as your memories adjust to the new reality (and the horniness definitely helps...) And, heh, I am a lover of cum. Expect loads like that in all my stories. I always find a way to slip it in... You'll find out more about the Seminal Revolution in future stories, I think. It's important to why all that cum is spewing everywhere!
1/25/22, 10:16 PM
This was sexy. I like the comments that led to the changes.

1/26/22, 5:21 AM
Yeah, I had a lot of fun with those. They slowly populated my mind as I envisioned the story. It was really fun to create! Glad you enjoyed it. @Heru Kane
1/26/22, 4:00 AM
Oh. . . Oh my. . . Can't wait for him to submit to Coach .
1/26/22, 3:19 AM
well oops,poor Luke or maybe lucky Luke?

hypnoslut
1/26/22, 3:51 AM
@ForgottenCradle Luke is going to get very lucky 😉
fry
1/26/22, 3:46 AM
Any chance you will return and write more chapters to this story? It's quite good so far.
Anonymous
1/26/22, 3:41 AM
Nice to see one hot stud being brought down. I enjoyed Sunghoon's awareness of how wrong things were but inability to disobey. Looking forward to what happens to the rest of the group.
Evan
1/26/22, 2:47 AM
Absolute masterpiece. So enjoyable. And hot as hell. Thanks for writing!
Jan 23, 2022
1/26/22, 1:45 AM
OMG this was so fricken hot! Loved the progression of the lewd stuff. by chance do you do commissions? i would love to have some ideas written out