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Tmp1142
1/26/22, 1:15 PM
Hope we get more of this story some day!
1/26/22, 12:58 PM
I'm loving this, Cant wait for a scene at his school and how everyone will react, and how he will use his old bully
1/26/22, 12:40 PM
Oh my god.. So good to have you back on this story. It was perfection
1/26/22, 11:10 AM
What a great story. I especially like the fact that we don't really know what Jesse was like before the Priapist started messaging him. It is clear that he is already familiar with the username at the start of the story so he must have already written something before. Is Jesse's thoughts of working out and feeling sexy just another of the Priapist's manipulations? I also really like the small hint that Jesse might actually have been straight before meeting the Priapist.

1/26/22, 12:38 PM
I’m glad you enjoyed it! Yeah, I deliberately left a fair amount of this story up to reader interpretation. It’s part of a series of these stories that’s going to gradually develop the reality change mechanic, so feel free to speculate, and if I’m clever enough about it, what’s actually going on will slowly be revealed… I will note that I think I meant to imply in the story that the Priapist is the one who most vocally wanted Jesse to show off his biceps. That’s as far back as the Priapist’s influence, magical or not, goes on Jesse. What he actually did, also up to reader interpretation, haha. @Lytcom
1/25/22, 10:36 PM
Oh, yes, yesss! Excellent! it was great, and I'm wishing to see what's next for the idol with all of those changes! It's going deliciously, I'll be anxiously waiting for the next chapter!!!

1/26/22, 9:29 AM
thank you for enjoying my story more to come @Plymouth58
1/26/22, 9:23 AM
A LOAD BLOWINGLY WONDERFUL TALE! 🍆💦💦
1/26/22, 6:41 AM
Beautifully paced. I love how the POV heightens the action and makes everything more immediate and sexy. I'm a fan.
1/26/22, 6:20 AM
I'm just sick with jealousy that you told a story like this before I had a chance to. :) Obviously you know your stuff. I hope there's more to come.
Anonymous
1/26/22, 4:01 AM
Very sexy. I enjoyed the way the reality change played out with "no, that can't be right" but then the horniness wins out over the skepticism. That Jesse then blew an impossibly huge load all over himself was the icing on top.

1/26/22, 5:24 AM
I brainstormed with various friends over these reality change mechanics for a good while, and I'm really glad I settled on what you pointed out—there's a moment of "no, that can't be right" like you mentioned, but it slowly passes as your memories adjust to the new reality (and the horniness definitely helps...) And, heh, I am a lover of cum. Expect loads like that in all my stories. I always find a way to slip it in... You'll find out more about the Seminal Revolution in future stories, I think. It's important to why all that cum is spewing everywhere!
1/25/22, 10:16 PM
This was sexy. I like the comments that led to the changes.

1/26/22, 5:21 AM
Yeah, I had a lot of fun with those. They slowly populated my mind as I envisioned the story. It was really fun to create! Glad you enjoyed it. @Heru Kane