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1/25/22, 2:20 PM
fuuuuck feels like I caught it just reading this. great work
1/6/22, 5:38 AM
This is my first time writing on this site. English is my secondary language. This is an experimental post since I'm a bit uncertain of what kind of stories people write here. Personally, I like to write stories that are often way off reality because in that way I could focus on writing fantasy. I accept both positive and negative comments.

1/25/22, 2:16 PM
@darkfantasy i think this is a very good first story! lots of stuff you can build on looking forward to a part two!
1/25/22, 2:14 PM
Agree with Evan 100%. This has become my most favorite series ever.
1/25/22, 2:06 PM
Can't wait for more.
Kyle Cicero
1/25/22, 12:09 PM
damn hot

1/25/22, 12:44 PM
@Kyle Cicero thanks man!
Evan
1/25/22, 12:43 PM
another great chapter. You really don't need to apologize. I'm looking this and I'm always just a little disappointed to reach the end of a chapter. Thank you for writing so much and praying so often. Seeing a new chapter always makes me a happy boi. And while I will selfishly always want more, take care of yourself. We don't want you to burn out, and want you to keep loving to write. As always, i look forward to seeing where your have planned to go with this series.
1/23/22, 8:30 PM
You're right, I was expecting a chapter where David would succumb, but it was so nice getting a development chapter instead and exploring the dynamics as they change. Thank you so much for writing this, I can't wait to see what else you come up with. As an aside too, it's so nice reading about an NB Femboy character in a story, since that's what I am, idk just nice to be represented. Thank you <3

1/25/22, 12:38 PM
@HypnoticPrey Thank you, that's what I thought! Would be good to have a 'Jack episode' and focus on developing the characters, instead of just rushing into talking about the next character. And thank you so much. Comments like this are why I work to have good representation in my stories. I'm so happy that you enjoy reading about Tom - I've said it before, but they are just such a joy to write. It *is* nice to be represented, and I will always strive to make sure everyone feels seen. <3
1/23/22, 8:47 AM
Fantastic chapter. I can't help but wonder how Josh will react to his bud's new interests! Jack seemed almost hypnotic in this chapter, but maybe I'm reading too much into it. And a fifth chapter too! Amazing!

1/25/22, 12:34 PM
@Norismo Thank you! No no please keep reading into it, I love hearing different ideas and theories from people :) And yes, I'm thinking the story will continue for a number of parts yet!
1/25/22, 8:28 AM
Verrrry hot!

1/25/22, 9:08 AM
@stimle thanks bud!
Ben
1/25/22, 8:14 AM
Love this series ❤ pushes so many buttons of mine 🔥 🔥 🔥