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3/15/25, 4:28 PM
Toddson is making a lot of gambles and territorial demands. He *just* snatched a lot of territory from our boys in the last novella. Did he know the other Alphas would start re-scenting the gym? Going to be hard for Ruiz's pack to make pushes on the other packs if they're without a prime territorial base. Also, while Ruiz is stricter and more traditional than Pete was, it's *still* too "liberal" for the other Alphas, even though Ruiz's pack seems to have King Ted's favor at the moment. A crying shame what happened to Nando. A very unexpected resolution to his dynamic with Bill, but hey, sometimes accidents and senseless tragedies happen. But does this mean that the Park is satisfied and won't demand another sacrifice? Also, poor Paul, he's gonna be so traumatized now...

Anon
3/15/25, 8:48 PM
@[ParadoxBear](/user/show/10002417) Toddson I think is over reaching and is going to gamble to a loss at some point. I can't wait for Mullins to get his comeuppance. And yes...it really seems even with Ruiz being orthodox moreso than Pete people are still grumbling on them. Hopefully the favor of the king will block some of that. Paul is absolutely traumatized. Theres going to be a lot of guilt there but Ruiz really should have told Paul not to take any of them to that park. Nando did not deserve that fate. But here's the better question...what is the park? No seriously- is it some kind of hungry entity or is something there? Honestly it doesn't seem like it's ever satisfied. We heard of other packs dumping ousted folk there. What made it into such a place? Some form of hex or curse? Guess Bill isn't troubled now though at least. Maybe he can focus on helping Frank now.

3/15/25, 9:18 PM
@[ParadoxBear](/user/show/10002417) Re: Nando... was it an accident though? Where did that detour sign come from? What was Bill practicing his magic on in earlier chapters?

3/15/25, 9:20 PM
@Anon Anon - regarding the national park. recall in the first novella, the park was placed under a magic spell, where, in perpetuity, any wolf who enters enters wolf form (and a animalistic wolf brain) and can never leave or transform back into to the guise or mind of human.
3/15/25, 7:26 PM
Interesting story. I'm flattered to know that my story has inspired you to create your own piece. :blush:

3/15/25, 7:33 PM
@[tomozco](/user/show/13902), thank you. And I've written others if you'd like to read them. :slightly_smiling_face: :foot:
3/15/25, 7:29 PM
Mmm delightful read as couldn't help but rub my nipples, lick my lips at the thoughts. Giggles haha. So loved the first as now 2nd story. Thank you
3/14/25, 5:03 PM
Très chaud. Il faut continuer…

3/14/25, 7:06 PM
@[U.K. guy](/user/show/1944978) Merci mec ! Dans quel direction tu aimerais voir évoluer l'histoire ?

3/14/25, 11:20 PM
@[leatherpiercing](/user/show/2581029) Il reste beaucoup d’autres á dominer et changer je crois. Le proviseur, plusieurs professeurs, des autres pères. Et Alex, est-ce qu'il va adopter le style aussi?

3/15/25, 3:46 PM
@[U.K. guy](/user/show/1944978) j'ai poursuivi l'histoire.... en attente de publication !

3/15/25, 7:06 PM
@[leatherpiercing](/user/show/2581029) 👍👍👍
3/15/25, 5:40 PM
I really hope you continue this story!
Anonymous
3/15/25, 5:23 PM
Hot stuff! Hope there's another part!
3/15/25, 4:51 PM
What a beautiful story! Thanks for sharing it!
Feb 16, 2025
3/15/25, 3:57 PM
Really hoping to see a part 2, this is great :D
3/15/25, 2:48 PM
This is such a great story! I'm surprised there's no comments. You did a great job!