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1/25/22, 1:54 PM
So hot. Can't wait for more. Great job on revising this story.

1/25/22, 9:32 PM
@Jonanator thanks man!
Art
1/25/22, 7:45 PM
Stimle, Still on of your best. I remember reading all of this back in the O'Melissokomos days. A lot of your great stories are still there. Please keep up the great work.!
1/25/22, 3:28 PM
This is a very good idea! Needing to honor all the deals he makes and making himself more likely to agree to a deal could lead to many interesting possibilities. I can't wait for part 3!
1/25/22, 2:20 PM
fuuuuck feels like I caught it just reading this. great work
1/6/22, 5:38 AM
This is my first time writing on this site. English is my secondary language. This is an experimental post since I'm a bit uncertain of what kind of stories people write here. Personally, I like to write stories that are often way off reality because in that way I could focus on writing fantasy. I accept both positive and negative comments.

1/25/22, 2:16 PM
@darkfantasy i think this is a very good first story! lots of stuff you can build on looking forward to a part two!
1/25/22, 2:14 PM
Agree with Evan 100%. This has become my most favorite series ever.
1/25/22, 2:06 PM
Can't wait for more.
Kyle Cicero
1/25/22, 12:09 PM
damn hot

1/25/22, 12:44 PM
@Kyle Cicero thanks man!
Evan
1/25/22, 12:43 PM
another great chapter. You really don't need to apologize. I'm looking this and I'm always just a little disappointed to reach the end of a chapter. Thank you for writing so much and praying so often. Seeing a new chapter always makes me a happy boi. And while I will selfishly always want more, take care of yourself. We don't want you to burn out, and want you to keep loving to write. As always, i look forward to seeing where your have planned to go with this series.