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1/25/22, 2:06 PM
Can't wait for more.
Kyle Cicero
1/25/22, 12:09 PM
damn hot

1/25/22, 12:44 PM
@Kyle Cicero thanks man!
Evan
1/25/22, 12:43 PM
another great chapter. You really don't need to apologize. I'm looking this and I'm always just a little disappointed to reach the end of a chapter. Thank you for writing so much and praying so often. Seeing a new chapter always makes me a happy boi. And while I will selfishly always want more, take care of yourself. We don't want you to burn out, and want you to keep loving to write. As always, i look forward to seeing where your have planned to go with this series.
1/23/22, 8:30 PM
You're right, I was expecting a chapter where David would succumb, but it was so nice getting a development chapter instead and exploring the dynamics as they change. Thank you so much for writing this, I can't wait to see what else you come up with. As an aside too, it's so nice reading about an NB Femboy character in a story, since that's what I am, idk just nice to be represented. Thank you <3

1/25/22, 12:38 PM
@HypnoticPrey Thank you, that's what I thought! Would be good to have a 'Jack episode' and focus on developing the characters, instead of just rushing into talking about the next character. And thank you so much. Comments like this are why I work to have good representation in my stories. I'm so happy that you enjoy reading about Tom - I've said it before, but they are just such a joy to write. It *is* nice to be represented, and I will always strive to make sure everyone feels seen. <3
1/23/22, 8:47 AM
Fantastic chapter. I can't help but wonder how Josh will react to his bud's new interests! Jack seemed almost hypnotic in this chapter, but maybe I'm reading too much into it. And a fifth chapter too! Amazing!

1/25/22, 12:34 PM
@Norismo Thank you! No no please keep reading into it, I love hearing different ideas and theories from people :) And yes, I'm thinking the story will continue for a number of parts yet!
1/25/22, 8:28 AM
Verrrry hot!

1/25/22, 9:08 AM
@stimle thanks bud!
Ben
1/25/22, 8:14 AM
Love this series ❤ pushes so many buttons of mine 🔥 🔥 🔥
Evan
1/25/22, 6:18 AM
Another awesome Jack Parker chapter. The plot thickens!
Jul 9, 2020
1/25/22, 5:16 AM
'Deep SEATED fear'...
Evan
1/21/22, 10:30 PM
"and gives him a piece of his mind." That's something to worry about in a hypnosis story. :D Thanks for another great chapter. This took a few turns I hadn't expected but loved it all. The submission, the pack is a nice parallel for their brotherly bond. I'm also admiring your setup. The stars becoming rings of colour, we've seen indicates close to oblivion so seeing that mentioned again here shows us how close Luke is getting to the edge if he wants to fight. And the PING suggests he fell. And a second ping is new, and interesting. For the record, I liked the love that Luke has for Felix and its cause of his apprehension. I also liked the love between the three of them and taking that further. A mix of love and submission and service.

hypnoslut
1/22/22, 4:56 AM
@Evan Im glad you seem to be liking my story so far. It's good my rambling at seems to be at least somewhat coherent. I'm going to try and experiment a bit so the sex doesnt feel repetitive, but The escalation is will likely remain in place. As for Luke. I hope I'm presenting his character well enough showing his understanding of love and other people. The poor boi doesn't really know what love is and is just discovering there are different kinds out there.

Evan
1/23/22, 11:25 PM
@hypnoslut I read the next chapter and love what you've done to break up the sex and keeping escalation. Great job. Luke really has had a rough life and needs some help finding his way. Another comment here didn't enjoy his "change" to bottom which I understand. I loved it and also the fact that it's not a change so much as what Luke wants but his internalised homophobia from his parents is stopping him from being fully himself and enjoying it. While a lot of stories "inflict" bottoming on people, this is maybe a little of that from Tommy's point of view, being the alpha, this feels a lot more like trying to heal Tommy and make him a better boi for himself and others.

hypnoslut
1/25/22, 4:43 AM
@Evan Appreciate it. I get people not liking my story. Its weird and theres no accounting for sexual preference. That said Im glad some are liking it. I should say. Luke has been brainwashed to accepting a few things. But yea, He was always a bottom. He just needed to be fucked into realizing it