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1/24/22, 2:57 AM
Really entertaining story!
1/24/22, 2:09 AM
Looking forward to more.
fry
1/24/22, 1:38 AM
Brian you are the best writer! I hope that there are many more excellent chapters to come and that you will continue to write even more excellent stories for us to drool over.
8/26/21, 9:22 PM
The transformation of the characters in this story makes me very original, I love a lot that Jax despite his insatiable desires does not abandon his role as a dominant male, this keeps the conflict present and the story improves every time. While Jax struggles to maintain his alpha pose even when sucking cock , Ronnie struggles to establish himself as a dominance figure despite his inferior physique, it's just great. I usually find it very boring when in a mental dominance story the submissive simply succumbs to his desires and becomes whore, but in this story I FEEL the dilemma that the characters have inside their minds, it's fascinating, I just love this story and I can't wait to see how these characters continue to evolve.

8/27/21, 4:52 AM
@TUMI1661 You said everything ;) I also have a problem when I read stories where the personality of the so-far straight guy shatters and he turns into a hungry bitch with no past or personality after a few paragrapahs. I love this conflict where there's a part in the character that remains the same and the contrast becomes so hot. I don't want Jax to forget his essence. He would still be the same guy but his focus would change. I've got a lot in store for him. The same goes for Ronnie. He feels like he needs to dominate but I can only imagine a smaller guy like him facing a big dude like Jax and all the anxiety and fear he would feel. Jax is a threatening guy so things don't change that fast. I have this foot on reality that I try to keep even when working with fantasy. I'm so glad you're enjoying this aspect of my story. These characters' development have just begun ;)

fry
1/24/22, 1:34 AM
@TUMI1661. You said it perfectly! The struggle of personality, of will, to gradually become their respective dominant and submissive roles. The gradual transformation of each into dominant and submissive roles while still maintaining flashes of mental strength that they use to achieve their new programming. You can feel the conflict, the uncertainty, the exploration as they take their latest programming and incorporate it into their developing psyche. They don;t just flip a switch and do what the programming says and instantly become something. They have to learn to accept their new roles as normal and the gradual expansion and acceptance of what they are ready to do. I can't wait to read more and follow their continued adventures!!
Freaki101
1/23/22, 2:19 PM
I LOVE all of your writing and this chapter is no exception! :)

1/23/22, 11:57 PM
@Freaki101 thanks man!
Evan
1/23/22, 11:21 PM
There was a bit of a twist here with Derick legitimately trying to help bois, while also being a boi himself so sex is inevitable. And that the Founder has a greater purpose for the hypnosis than just making sex slaves. Helping them be well-adjusted sex slaves. Haha. That Luke's so easily affected but also can help other bois find their truths is also really neat. I think he'll have a lot of work ahead. Another great chapter. And I love the lengths, really get to enjoy and sink in to the world.
Tyrol
1/23/22, 7:45 PM
thanks for writing this addition! had fun reading it. my own next chapter is almost done I just kinda forgot to post it so hopefully it'll be up soon!

1/23/22, 9:26 PM
@Tyrol thanks for reading! I loved your story so much, so when I saw that there hasn't been an update in a bit, I figured I would expand on the story. I'd love to work with you and really explore this world more and create so crazy hot stories.
1/23/22, 9:21 PM
I missed so much this series, is so sad you wont be doing more but! I'm glad you'd still write other stories, I like your stuff <3
1/23/22, 7:36 PM
I wonder what will happen to Trevor.
1/23/22, 6:59 PM
Loved this! great tension build up and then the release.. so hot. looking forward to reading more of this and your other stories!