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Evan
1/23/22, 11:21 PM
There was a bit of a twist here with Derick legitimately trying to help bois, while also being a boi himself so sex is inevitable. And that the Founder has a greater purpose for the hypnosis than just making sex slaves. Helping them be well-adjusted sex slaves. Haha. That Luke's so easily affected but also can help other bois find their truths is also really neat. I think he'll have a lot of work ahead. Another great chapter. And I love the lengths, really get to enjoy and sink in to the world.
Tyrol
1/23/22, 7:45 PM
thanks for writing this addition! had fun reading it. my own next chapter is almost done I just kinda forgot to post it so hopefully it'll be up soon!

1/23/22, 9:26 PM
@Tyrol thanks for reading! I loved your story so much, so when I saw that there hasn't been an update in a bit, I figured I would expand on the story. I'd love to work with you and really explore this world more and create so crazy hot stories.
1/23/22, 9:21 PM
I missed so much this series, is so sad you wont be doing more but! I'm glad you'd still write other stories, I like your stuff <3
1/23/22, 7:36 PM
I wonder what will happen to Trevor.
1/23/22, 6:59 PM
Loved this! great tension build up and then the release.. so hot. looking forward to reading more of this and your other stories!
Cracker
1/23/22, 6:11 PM
Yeah its great
Anonymous
1/23/22, 5:24 PM
Wow! Each chapter just gets better and better! i love this whole hypno world idea, and the way it is written is so good! If i could give mote than 5 stars, I certainly would.
1/23/22, 5:12 PM
aww, and I was so excited you'd added a chapter! loved this series!
Jockmorphr
1/23/22, 5:10 PM
Incredibly hot story!
1/23/22, 5:09 PM
Ah, I love this story so much. I'm a sucker for feet and dads enslaved, Ali is even a bear man like type so even better! The whole story was marvelous and and I cannot wait to see what's next <3 I hope the other dad falls as well or teachers/jocks too <3