Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/23/22, 2:18 PM
The story could use some more editing, but I am glad to see sexy K-pop lads get put through the wringer. The scene certainly has plenty of possibilities to explore from their carefully controlled life being upended to having their lives even more strictly managed than it already was. Meticulously trained bodies can be "ruined" for their career or deformed into even greater exaggerations than they already were. I am curious about where things will go.

1/23/22, 3:17 PM
Thanks this would be an ongoing series and more is expected to happen.@
1/23/22, 3:11 PM
Reading about Stevie's trip down this ladder never fails to wet the front of briefs.
1/23/22, 2:34 PM
Wow! I think I need to put in a feature request to Martin to increase the maximum ratings. 5 is not enough.
Anonymous
1/23/22, 2:30 PM
It's good. I can't wait for the next chapter.
1/23/22, 2:16 PM
It was a good story.
1/23/22, 12:13 PM
this is beyond hot!! i'm in love with manservant/butler transformations after this. so well written!
abc123
1/23/22, 3:04 AM
Storywise, it's pretty good. But, change of the MC's role (from top to bottom) has killed my all of my interests. But, it's better to write what you love rather than what the audience wants, so don't take this comment to heart. Great work!
Blakenikolas
1/22/22, 2:46 PM
was loving this story until the slow introduction of n@zi stuff. consider me out

1/22/22, 10:00 PM
@Blakenikolas Seems like quite an overreaction to one of their clients wanting skinhead *roleplay*! As far as we know they have no plans to invade Poland.

Blakenikolas
1/22/22, 11:55 PM
@amul maybe I'm not into that? its called feedback. And the character also wears an iron cross. while bikers use it, it comes from fascist germany

1/23/22, 1:37 AM
@Blakenikolas It's just a one shot hustling mission...

Blakenikolas
1/23/22, 1:59 AM
@John Kuir Literally giving my opinion. Its a turn off for me.
1/23/22, 1:43 AM
fuckin awesome story.....
SlutForHypno
1/23/22, 12:40 AM
Its always funny how I imagine these chapters to be shorter than I expect. Then I end up thinking of more stuff to write. I tried experimenting with this chapter and will probably try some more next one so it doesnt get too repetitive. One thing I forgot to add Derrick mention is, Derrick does absolutely have sex with his hypnotized fellow bois. But that's because the 2 are directly linked in the world but he does primarily try to use it as an outlet to help people first and foremost Next week Luke make his amends and finally helps Felix come to his truth