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Jockmorphr
1/22/22, 5:20 PM
@Jack Parker I'm just catching up on this story, but it is really great. I'm enjoying Grant's character and the humiliating situations you're putting him into. Really looking forward to seeing how things evolve now that the team knows his secrets!

1/22/22, 9:34 PM
@Jockmorphr thanks man! it was a fun commission
1/22/22, 2:10 PM
oh the painful endurance of this author's ability to stop all time and push me endlessly into a mind fuck .... so very good

1/22/22, 9:34 PM
@Tornado aww thanks man!
1/22/22, 7:17 PM
very good start
JoLav
12/14/21, 11:42 PM
@Plymouth58 hoping the next chapter is a Christmas gift to your fans! Love how he's being mentally destroyed. Also hope there aren't too many friends who come at once. Seems better for the reader when you cam offer more detail on each person then a bunch show up and you can't write in detail about what happens to each one. Very good so far! Love he's been turned into a pot head against his will.

12/15/21, 7:09 AM
Hello, @JoLav! I'm very happy to know you're enjoying with this story! Don't worry, there will be enough space to show off each characters and give them all the chance to shine (maybe the problem is that I could spend too much time with each one of them, you have already seen how long the chapters are getting! ha ha!) I had already planned who would appear first and the order, although now I'm starting to have a little doubt about who would be the most appropriate and fun to be the first one. I'm putting all my effort to have a new chapter ready for Christmas, but there's a lot of things getting in the way. The end of the year is all running! I'm not sure if I will have it ready in time, but I'll do my best! Thanks for comment and for stay tuned!

GHman
1/10/22, 2:29 AM
@Plymouth58 I'm so excited for the next chapter!!!

1/20/22, 5:11 PM
Hello, @GHman! just an update, buddy. You see, I had a good part of chapter 13 already written, but my computer had some sort of problem with the windows, and it fell in a coma. I'm still waiting for a response of my technician to know the state of my PC, and to know what files went lose and what he was able to rescue. Supposedly my computer was going to be fixed by the l last week, but I don't have it back yet. It was an unfortunate situation, since I had another commissioned story in works there, along with parts of the next chapters of 'The Emerald Downgrade', and some other ideas for new stories. So, it may take a time to have it back, or in the worst case to rewrite all. To make things worse, I catched Covid-19 I don't know how since I wear mask all the time, but I suppose it was as Two-Face said in Batman Forever: "Blind, stupid, simple, doo-dah, clueless luck!" Luckly it's not that bad since I was already vaccinated, but as you can see there's many reasons for the delay. Anyway, it might take a time, but Green Lantern's misadventures will continue as soon as possible.

GHman
1/22/22, 5:45 AM
@Plymouth58 So very sorry to hear you had COVID! Hope you fully recover and are able to find our next chapter! So looking forward to the further destruction of this super hero. Hope by the end he's a totally corrupted loser that's a burned out heavy drug addict. 😉 Also, I didn't know you did commissions!? Would be interested since your style is amazing!

1/22/22, 2:58 PM
@GHman thank you so much for your good wishes, pal! I'm slowly getting better, and thankfully covid didn't hit me THAT bad thanks to the vaccine. Science is truly wonderful!! I'll be happy to take a commission from you, buddy, please send me a direct message to talk about it. If you are on the Discord group, you'll find me there with my username 🙂
Zac
1/20/22, 2:30 PM
So hot. Really hope you continue with this story.

1/20/22, 2:58 PM
I don't think I'll be continuing with these characters, but I do intend to keep writing other stories!

Zac
1/22/22, 1:21 PM
@Enchanting then I'll look forward to your next stories!
Blackjinx123
1/22/22, 1:07 PM
YAAAY! So happy to see the next chapter of this awesome series. I'm so looking forward to seeing Aiden and Preston continue down this road, as well as their douche-canoe father being added to the mix farther down the line (fingers crossed). I seriously loved Aiden's character development in this one, and am excited to see him grow as a character. Sassy Aiden is sexy as fuck, not to mention Preston's shower seduction! amazing job, dear author! Excited to read the next one ;)
Kent
1/22/22, 10:54 AM
im so excited for more
Jul 23, 2019
1/22/22, 10:33 AM
Very hot story. Would so like to become the prey to Lutz and Ahmed, made into their slave forever without the ability to escape or change my mind.
Collegechastity
1/17/22, 9:55 PM
I loved reading the original series and love the new one as well! Thank you for bringing it back. Looking forward to the new chapters and stories you have planned before the last 2 chapters from the original pick back up and what additional details you bring to those too. Love the humiliation and situations you're putting Brody in. Looking forward to how you plan to bring his father and others into the story and future situations and what Kevin gets to do with Brody. Are you planning to continue the story past the point where the original ends?

1/22/22, 5:09 AM
@Collegechastity Thanks! The goal is to write about Brody's adventures all the way through graduation and see from there.

Collegechastity
1/22/22, 5:36 AM
@Mithrasity Thanks for the response! Looking forward to the additional months of adventures that Brody will experience after the championship. Also excited to see who else you bring in as a Sir (or tormentor) and what Brody will have to do for him and if he'll have to do more public/humiliating tasks. Also if another (alpha/beta) sub will be added to the story.
1/22/22, 5:00 AM
I read this amazing chapter and forgot to comment here afterwards. Incredible as always!! I really like what you're hinting at there, with the guys who fuck Xander getting more muscular and hotter... love that. Does that mean he can change guys who fuck him into hot jocks? I'm really into that idea! Also, I really want to read more about situations with misunderstandings, accidents, exhibitionism and sexual obliviousness. You said you wanted us to give you some ideas of scenes like that so here are a few of the things I'd like to see more, for example: Xander being clumsy (or just the game doing it for him) so he can trip and fall face down on a hot jock's crotch, him pushing the guy's loose shorts or pants all the way down as he falls by accident and getting a face full of the jock's big dick. And the jock seeing nothing wrong with it... This could happen in reverse also with a hot jock falling on Xander and ending up with his face on Xander's hot ass, nose and mouth deep in Xander's crack, almost at his tight hole... and more and more hot guys around Xander being casually disrobed in front of him. Just situations in general involving lots of exhibitionism and sexual innuendo... one where Xander ends up on all fours with a hot jock on top of him, looking like they're fucking, would be really hot too... and I think these kind of situations could happen A LOT when Xander is near Lucas, considering how oblivious Lucas is of his own nakedness and hotness. Anyway, here are my suggestions for you, I love this story with all my heart and I can't wait for the next chapter!