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1/22/22, 5:00 AM
I read this amazing chapter and forgot to comment here afterwards. Incredible as always!! I really like what you're hinting at there, with the guys who fuck Xander getting more muscular and hotter... love that. Does that mean he can change guys who fuck him into hot jocks? I'm really into that idea! Also, I really want to read more about situations with misunderstandings, accidents, exhibitionism and sexual obliviousness. You said you wanted us to give you some ideas of scenes like that so here are a few of the things I'd like to see more, for example: Xander being clumsy (or just the game doing it for him) so he can trip and fall face down on a hot jock's crotch, him pushing the guy's loose shorts or pants all the way down as he falls by accident and getting a face full of the jock's big dick. And the jock seeing nothing wrong with it... This could happen in reverse also with a hot jock falling on Xander and ending up with his face on Xander's hot ass, nose and mouth deep in Xander's crack, almost at his tight hole... and more and more hot guys around Xander being casually disrobed in front of him. Just situations in general involving lots of exhibitionism and sexual innuendo... one where Xander ends up on all fours with a hot jock on top of him, looking like they're fucking, would be really hot too... and I think these kind of situations could happen A LOT when Xander is near Lucas, considering how oblivious Lucas is of his own nakedness and hotness. Anyway, here are my suggestions for you, I love this story with all my heart and I can't wait for the next chapter!
1/22/22, 2:32 AM
Really cool, Washington to see where it goes.
1/22/22, 1:57 AM
love the leather sex scene. I wonder what this new guy wants with JD? guess I will have to wait till the next chapter.
Mar 13, 2021
Chastor
1/21/22, 9:33 PM
Any plans to continue this?

1/22/22, 1:52 AM
Yes @Chastor! I have an outline at the moment but I have trouble making time to work on it
1/21/22, 11:03 PM
I really hope you continue with this, theres lots of cool places to take it, it's really good!
1/21/22, 10:33 PM
Wowwow, how hot and exciting! Eager to read about what comes next while I strain in my own cage! 😛😛😛
Evan
1/21/22, 9:38 PM
I loved this chapter. I think you're getting more of a hang of dialogue, great going! And the content remains excellent. The trap. Inevitable and so enjoyable.
Anonymous
1/21/22, 9:31 PM
I'm new to the site and reading some old stories. This was wicked funny and hot!!
1/21/22, 9:23 PM
A story mixing Pokemon and gay erotic seems to odd.
1/21/22, 7:42 PM
great m8. looking forward to next. tattoo? piercing? and: they both don't smoke yet.