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Jan 19, 2022
1/20/22, 1:57 PM
What a departure from your usual story line and that's your creative right to do so. Now that you've "got the cobwebs out of your brain" return to your original genre. That's an order!
Archer19cm
1/14/22, 11:59 PM
Delightful read. And I am Team Eddy the Monster in some form. Kudos!

1/20/22, 1:27 PM
@Archer19cm Allegiance noted. ;)
1/11/22, 12:32 PM
Eddy could be monsterised, maybe on a part time basis where each is monster or human but cannot control the process e.g. They wake up each day as HH HM MH orMM

1/20/22, 1:23 PM
@Morph some interesting ideas. I think lore wise human to monster would be almost impossible ('never say never' with magic, but, regular human into a semi-magical beast? truly difficult). However, I hadn't considered the scenario of letting Yarif "spend a few days" as a human until I read your comment, and this would be no problem for a decent wizard or witch. With appropriate motivation, the mayor would probably do this for Yarif. The idea also appeals to me, because it would be akin to a 'walk in the enemies shoes' scenario. I have a potential chapter coming up where Eddy tries to bring Yarif to "the gay village", claiming "well, we're gay; we're as much magical beings and we are gay so these people are our tribe too, these *human* queers; and they're well used to being afraid to walk down the street alone for fear of danger". Maybe they meet a drag queen, (maybe like a "shock" drag queen, or some gruff but friendly looking bears).
May 24, 2019
1/20/22, 1:20 PM
Ok, I understand. It was too rushed. Due to depression I usually have to balance hurrying up to finish a story or not posting anything. If I wait too long to to post something it can often be forgotten or unfinished because the next depressive episode drains me of energy and creativity. I want to work on longer better stories but it doesn't always work out that way.
1/20/22, 12:53 PM
Please more, I love seeing more of this one!
Jan 19, 2022
pisslave
1/20/22, 10:30 AM
thank You, Boss, for that story. Something new. Prefer though the "bringing down" stuff.
1/17/22, 12:25 AM
Peace, would you consider writing Nation of Islam (NOI) content? Since they seem to fit the brainwashing/indoctrination narrative, pretty hot tbh lol. Here's a pic as demonstration: https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/751211129748848680/932349741071736862/681007_TMNZ4krb.png

1/20/22, 8:48 AM
@Wasp I'm interested. Please give me a few more details of what you'd like. mgreene70@yahoo.com
Anonymous
1/20/22, 7:25 AM
this story is amazing. i would love another chapter, possibly a time skip to show scott completely broken and obedient.
Evan
1/20/22, 6:49 AM
I'm getting a lot of enjoyment from waiting for Luke to succumb. And the fun ways he falls into hypnosis despite trying not to. The story is great. I did an edit to split up the dialogue and some minor spelling/grammar fixes for anyone reading after this but it did weird indent stuff so sorry if I broke your formatting. The content is really good. I find myself really wanting Luke to succumb but I love the slow, gradual fall and teasing you are doing. I really enjoyed how he has already been changed, having always thought of himself as a boi before he got there as well as after. Eager for more oblivious changes while he thinks he's totally aware and sort of in control. Very keen to see more.