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2/27/22, 6:39 AM
this is one of the weirdest concepts i've ever seen. but the perseveration of Brett ans everyone else on who has a dick what will become of it, how it will be a clit etc, just goes to world build how obsessed this culture is with its ritual. also, the sex is well written for sure it is detailed but also unusual not cliched not your standard fare cant wait to see what happens to Brett, and Jonas, and Jake, and Liam, and Aiden youve sowed so many good seeds!!
boi98229
2/27/22, 4:36 AM
Wow! Hot! i am already in love with this premise and all of the characters. The induction and initial training seemed a little too easy, but then i didn't just finish a 9-hour flight, have a big meal (drugged?), wear a motivating belt buckle, or stare at a wavering candle flame. I strongly suspect that Matthew was already being very subtly trained via the video chats he had been having with Dr. Brown. He did seem to take a very quick liking to those belt buckles! And what about that orange juice?! Sorry, no time for comments now. I have to read on!
2/27/22, 3:44 AM
Please continue!
2/27/22, 3:43 AM
Just caught this one! Hot. Add more. This could go a long way.
2/27/22, 3:00 AM
great work for a first story :) looking forward to more of your writing hope the coach joins in as another muscle bitch
Saccnt2
2/27/22, 2:04 AM
This is a really good story!
2/17/22, 1:30 AM
I really love this one. Hope there is a sequel sometime.

2/26/22, 11:31 PM
@Drake Nightstorm The part about Justin is super hot. I have gone back to that bit a few times now.
Anonymous
2/26/22, 10:49 PM
Hope there's more...soon. I really need more...
2/26/22, 9:10 PM
This is so hot. Can you incorporate more tiddy play and nip torture for the next chapter?
2/26/22, 4:46 PM
This is definitely in my top list now. For some reason, when I first read the original version of this, I didn't love it the way I do now. Thank you so much for the changes you made to this, now. Can't wait for more!!

SC Walker
2/26/22, 8:18 PM
@revenge88fics I'm so glad you appreciate the changes. I've worked really hard to improve as a writer, particularly in characterization. I feel like Luke is more three-dimensional now than just a caricature.