Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/18/22, 11:32 PM
This story is awesome really interested in how it all turns out. More bunnies would of course be better :) Hope there is a next part.
1/18/22, 11:23 PM
Oh but I do love medical scenes ever so.
Martin
1/18/22, 10:08 PM
This is really becoming very intense and much better than I expected. Respect! You have to work a bit on your spelling ("seen" instead of "scene" for example) and especially you should format your stories a bit better (use WAY more paragraph breaks, especially when using direct speech). But this is really good for your first attempt. What exactly is stigking? I didn't even know that we're in a partnership now. Not that I mind, but I would have liked to be told first... :)

hypnoslut
1/18/22, 10:30 PM
@Martin Thanks I appreciate the input. This is literally my first ever writing project I decided to do the night before when I was bored and couldn't sleep haha. I also appreciate the input. I've never really done this before and am not really sure where to break up paragraphs. Though I can totally see you're point. Its kinda why I opened it up to editing. As for the Stigking...sorry about that lol. Both that and a lot of my spelling with this recent story was it was 2 in the morning and had to work the next day so I wanted to get it done before I went to bed. I'm glad you like it though and am willing to listen to input both in terms of basic editing crap and story structure haha.
1/18/22, 10:09 PM
This was such a hot start! cant wait for more!!

1/18/22, 10:16 PM
@Mr Jack Off thanks man!
1/18/22, 10:03 PM
Cody knows a perfect being when he sees one~~
1/18/22, 10:02 PM
Was expecting Nick to be more thinky thinky and objecting to the reprogramming, especially since it involves sexual reorientation.
1/18/22, 10:01 PM
I knew this one was going to be incredibly sad going in and almost didn't read it as a result. It's beautiful, but as I expected it's sad.
1/18/22, 9:58 PM
Was so not expecting Osamu to be the underlying protagonist