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SlutForHypno
1/19/22, 7:01 AM
So genuine question for the people enjoying this series. As you can see this story is a longer one. I feel bad the spicy stuff in this scene is a little shorter. But IDK if I want to make the chapters any longer seeing as this is still porn and not some kind of important novel. This chapter is my longest yet so I split up the chapters once again. I have no problem just writing 2 chapters at once and releasing them together in the near future if that works Or I could just release longer chapters. Either works for me but since I'm subjecting you guys to my poor writing I'd figure I'd ask lol. I just really don't want to cut out a lot of the set up since its part of what makes it really enjoyable writing the series and I feel the set up is part of what makes the payoff even better. Speaking of which, the next 2 or so chapters or probably going to be mostly payoff. Next chapter Luke and Spencer are sick of being blue balled and decide to risk the watch again. Only this time in Luke's Dorm
1/18/22, 9:47 PM
Robin's recent adventures in hypno might well capture the kind of game that you might like the most: consensual, but the subconscious is bratty and wants to wrestle control with you. Hmm, my latin is also bad... hehehe...

Martin
1/19/22, 6:06 AM
@naturallyInconsistent Indeed! That's why I'm following his adventures so diligently!
1/18/22, 9:50 PM
*doesn't understand the humiliation...* hehehe Oooo, Joshie Joshie, turnabout's fair play~~

Martin
1/19/22, 6:05 AM
@naturallyInconsistent For someone who identifies himself as dominant and top, getting "turned" by someone like Joshie is a huge humiliation - and a huge turn on at the same time!
1/18/22, 9:51 PM
Some later world building exposition would be welcome, even if not sexy~

Martin
1/19/22, 6:03 AM
@naturallyInconsistent Rly? I thought my "instruction manual" was enough boring text already :)
1/18/22, 9:54 PM
Am quite lost reading this. Isn't he said to be an incubus? But without reading the manual to the succubus part, he is a succubus in this chapter. But this makes meow hard!!!

Martin
1/19/22, 6:03 AM
@naturallyInconsistent You mean because he bottomed? For me I didn't draw the line between inbcubus or succubus at whether he's dom or sub. He's male, so he's an incubus by definition. The great thing about his new sexual awakening as an incubus is that he can and will accommodate every man's sexual desire. So if his 'victim' desires a sub as a partner, Chad will be the perfect sub slut for him. And vice versa. For me, that would be the greatest achievement. Being the best sexual partner you can be, having no issues adapting at all and while still enjoying it to the fullest!
1/19/22, 4:58 AM
i don't think I made a comment on this series since the first chapter. I ended up enjoying it far more than I assumed I would at first, not being really into the superhero thing. It also felt initially like the relationship was going to consist mostly of bullying, so imagine my total surprise when it slowly revealed itself to be about two young, deeply closeted men trying to negotiate same sex attraction and presumptions of masculinity. That for me is the gripping conflict at play here, makes me feel pain for the characters in their so entirely believable and un-comic-bookey struggle to understand their emotions for one another. Very well handled and deftly written.
fry
1/19/22, 3:49 AM
very good story. please write more!
fry
1/19/22, 3:26 AM
This was INTENSE!! This is one of my most favorite stories ever!! The mix of domination and submission that is being programmed into them is really erotic and the sexual give and take while in his room between Jax and Ronnie is awesome! Ronnie pleasuring Jax's ass while Jax sucks him dry was incredible Please continue. I can't wait to see what happens next!!
1/19/22, 2:44 AM
Hi, Ever one. I keep reading this story over the years. Still love it. the hypnosis is great. he is controlled as a statue. The best. I try to contact one ring way back, my have been in 2014. Still love to get a message back from him.
EntrancedGay92
1/18/22, 11:32 AM
I enjoyed this story. It was short, sweet, and to the point! I can never resist (pun intended) a husband who is hypnotized to hypnotize his partner. Looking forward to the chapter, if there is one.

1/19/22, 1:46 AM
@EntrancedGay92 There is a new chapter that should be approved for publishing very soon.