Recent Comments

Martin
1/18/22, 10:08 PM
This is really becoming very intense and much better than I expected. Respect! You have to work a bit on your spelling ("seen" instead of "scene" for example) and especially you should format your stories a bit better (use WAY more paragraph breaks, especially when using direct speech). But this is really good for your first attempt. What exactly is stigking? I didn't even know that we're in a partnership now. Not that I mind, but I would have liked to be told first... :)

hypnoslut
1/18/22, 10:30 PM
@Martin Thanks I appreciate the input. This is literally my first ever writing project I decided to do the night before when I was bored and couldn't sleep haha. I also appreciate the input. I've never really done this before and am not really sure where to break up paragraphs. Though I can totally see you're point. Its kinda why I opened it up to editing. As for the Stigking...sorry about that lol. Both that and a lot of my spelling with this recent story was it was 2 in the morning and had to work the next day so I wanted to get it done before I went to bed. I'm glad you like it though and am willing to listen to input both in terms of basic editing crap and story structure haha.
1/18/22, 10:09 PM
This was such a hot start! cant wait for more!!

1/18/22, 10:16 PM
@Mr Jack Off thanks man!
1/18/22, 10:03 PM
Cody knows a perfect being when he sees one~~
1/18/22, 10:02 PM
Was expecting Nick to be more thinky thinky and objecting to the reprogramming, especially since it involves sexual reorientation.
1/18/22, 10:01 PM
I knew this one was going to be incredibly sad going in and almost didn't read it as a result. It's beautiful, but as I expected it's sad.
1/18/22, 9:58 PM
Was so not expecting Osamu to be the underlying protagonist
Jul 28, 2020
Martin
7/30/20, 12:11 PM
J, thank you for your nice words. Actually I had a very clear picture of the person I was writing for in my head - as BlondieBoy has posted his image on Discord many times (and to me privately), and since the story is text I practically say to him himself, there's little need to describe his own looks... Anyway, I mention that he's got blue eyes at the beginning of the story. That would be one of the rare cases, where adding a picture would be nice. So, BlondieBoy, would you mind if I added a picture of yours to that story?! 😜 BTW, I have to add, that BlondieBoy is not *really* that person in the story, as he doesn't have any trust issues and is sufficiently slutty without needing any hypnosis!

1/18/22, 9:36 PM
@Martin Easy. Then it is meow. Did you hypno away meow's anxieties? THANK YOUUUUU!!!!
Martin
4/13/20, 7:43 AM
Thank you all. Actually I have an idea for another SX-FX story. I might make more of them, not as series, but just stories loosely in the same universe. I think I'd like that!

1/18/22, 9:31 PM
@Martin I kinda think this kind of wholesomeness should be made into a thing where various authors contribute their spinoffs.