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1/18/22, 9:50 PM
*doesn't understand the humiliation...* hehehe Oooo, Joshie Joshie, turnabout's fair play~~

Martin
1/19/22, 6:05 AM
@naturallyInconsistent For someone who identifies himself as dominant and top, getting "turned" by someone like Joshie is a huge humiliation - and a huge turn on at the same time!
1/18/22, 9:51 PM
Some later world building exposition would be welcome, even if not sexy~

Martin
1/19/22, 6:03 AM
@naturallyInconsistent Rly? I thought my "instruction manual" was enough boring text already :)
1/18/22, 9:54 PM
Am quite lost reading this. Isn't he said to be an incubus? But without reading the manual to the succubus part, he is a succubus in this chapter. But this makes meow hard!!!

Martin
1/19/22, 6:03 AM
@naturallyInconsistent You mean because he bottomed? For me I didn't draw the line between inbcubus or succubus at whether he's dom or sub. He's male, so he's an incubus by definition. The great thing about his new sexual awakening as an incubus is that he can and will accommodate every man's sexual desire. So if his 'victim' desires a sub as a partner, Chad will be the perfect sub slut for him. And vice versa. For me, that would be the greatest achievement. Being the best sexual partner you can be, having no issues adapting at all and while still enjoying it to the fullest!
1/19/22, 4:58 AM
i don't think I made a comment on this series since the first chapter. I ended up enjoying it far more than I assumed I would at first, not being really into the superhero thing. It also felt initially like the relationship was going to consist mostly of bullying, so imagine my total surprise when it slowly revealed itself to be about two young, deeply closeted men trying to negotiate same sex attraction and presumptions of masculinity. That for me is the gripping conflict at play here, makes me feel pain for the characters in their so entirely believable and un-comic-bookey struggle to understand their emotions for one another. Very well handled and deftly written.
fry
1/19/22, 3:49 AM
very good story. please write more!
fry
1/19/22, 3:26 AM
This was INTENSE!! This is one of my most favorite stories ever!! The mix of domination and submission that is being programmed into them is really erotic and the sexual give and take while in his room between Jax and Ronnie is awesome! Ronnie pleasuring Jax's ass while Jax sucks him dry was incredible Please continue. I can't wait to see what happens next!!
1/19/22, 2:44 AM
Hi, Ever one. I keep reading this story over the years. Still love it. the hypnosis is great. he is controlled as a statue. The best. I try to contact one ring way back, my have been in 2014. Still love to get a message back from him.
EntrancedGay92
1/18/22, 11:32 AM
I enjoyed this story. It was short, sweet, and to the point! I can never resist (pun intended) a husband who is hypnotized to hypnotize his partner. Looking forward to the chapter, if there is one.

1/19/22, 1:46 AM
@EntrancedGay92 There is a new chapter that should be approved for publishing very soon.
1/18/22, 10:08 PM
Ahmed's fall is probably a bit too abrupt and easy. I was kinda expecting that there would be some kind of restraining---after all, by then, Osamu had control over everybody else in the room, and could easily have him pinned. Ahmed's recklessness, to confront without any backup, not even telling his hypno friends, or even his tists, is a bit weird, given that Cody already warned him.

1/19/22, 1:26 AM
@naturallyInconsistent If I'd actually gone through the story "normally" (meaning going through proofreaders as well as me re-reading it one or two more times), I probably would've tightened that up a bit to make it more plausible. My thinking was that Ahmed basically wanted to go under, and was therefore careless. Having seen it now on H4G a little, I know that some people don't put up much of a fight, especially if they've been under multiple times. Osamu recognized what was going on very early—most hypnotists would recognize the signs of someone fighting off trance—and he was just toying with Ahmed once he realized what was really happening. Osamu's tone and...errr...threatening-seductiveness(?) were already playing into Ahmed's fantasies, so he didn't need much of a push to take him over the edge.
1/19/22, 12:26 AM
Different & a fun read.