Recent Comments

1/19/22, 12:17 AM
Nice job with some difficult tags! I think you chose the correct ending. Much as I love muscle growth stories, I couldn't help but find myself hoping that the narrator would eventually be wise enough to wish for his dysmorphia to go away, since that is the true source of his problems. But how to play that for laughs? You really cannot. I think you found your way to the best ending for this story without ruining the light tone.
1/18/22, 11:43 PM
Very, very hot. Would love to read more. How do I apply to Hypno University?

hypnoslut
1/19/22, 12:14 AM
@Beaner Thank you very much. IDK how many more chapters it will be, but I intend to at least finish Luke's story. The boi still has a long way to go. And sadly, you can't apply to Cub University. The students are selected. And whether or not they want to, or are even are aware of it...they attend forever
Sexcrab
1/18/22, 11:33 PM
Simple and captivating, a great series.
Anonymous
1/18/22, 11:32 PM
This story is awesome really interested in how it all turns out. More bunnies would of course be better :) Hope there is a next part.
1/18/22, 11:23 PM
Oh but I do love medical scenes ever so.
Martin
1/18/22, 10:08 PM
This is really becoming very intense and much better than I expected. Respect! You have to work a bit on your spelling ("seen" instead of "scene" for example) and especially you should format your stories a bit better (use WAY more paragraph breaks, especially when using direct speech). But this is really good for your first attempt. What exactly is stigking? I didn't even know that we're in a partnership now. Not that I mind, but I would have liked to be told first... :)

hypnoslut
1/18/22, 10:30 PM
@Martin Thanks I appreciate the input. This is literally my first ever writing project I decided to do the night before when I was bored and couldn't sleep haha. I also appreciate the input. I've never really done this before and am not really sure where to break up paragraphs. Though I can totally see you're point. Its kinda why I opened it up to editing. As for the Stigking...sorry about that lol. Both that and a lot of my spelling with this recent story was it was 2 in the morning and had to work the next day so I wanted to get it done before I went to bed. I'm glad you like it though and am willing to listen to input both in terms of basic editing crap and story structure haha.
1/18/22, 10:09 PM
This was such a hot start! cant wait for more!!

1/18/22, 10:16 PM
@Mr Jack Off thanks man!
1/18/22, 10:03 PM
Cody knows a perfect being when he sees one~~
1/18/22, 10:02 PM
Was expecting Nick to be more thinky thinky and objecting to the reprogramming, especially since it involves sexual reorientation.